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Nature Tames

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I enter the field, colored by sun's flames Dark distant mountains, mystery lures Life now survival, without any games I am alone, reliant on my own cures The bright distant light, soaks me with warm hope As I make my own path through the tall grass There is a reason that I strive to cope To reach dreams that could break easy like glass My heart is softened by few clouds that drift Lifting my spirit to some place unknown That eliminates my fears, as they sift Falling into the sunset that is shown It is all in the way that nature tames I enter the field colored by sun's flames 5/14/19 *Entry for Nature Scene Orphan Sonnet contest. Sponsor: Dale Gregory Cozart

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M. L. Kiser

Date: 5/18/2019 6:34:00 PM

A beautiful sonnet; vibrant imagery that takes me there; wonderfully calm.

Heidi Sands
Date: 5/18/2019 6:37:00 PM

I am happy to hear that and appreciate your comments and support. Have a nice evening :)

Dennis Spilchuk

Date: 5/15/2019 12:45:00 PM

A descriptive sonnet boasting nature's beauty.

Heidi Sands
Date: 5/15/2019 12:47:00 PM

Thank you for your visit and comment :)

Subimal Sinha-Roy

Date: 5/15/2019 8:47:00 AM

A beautiful Sonnet, Heidi, and a nice take on the contest theme.

Heidi Sands
Date: 5/15/2019 8:53:00 AM

Thank you very much Subimal :) I appreciate your visit and comment. Have a nice day.

Joseph May

Date: 5/15/2019 5:51:00 AM

You depict the scene well...Beautiful write Heidi...

Heidi Sands
Date: 5/15/2019 7:30:00 AM

Thank you Joseph. I appreciate your kind comment :)

Tom Cunningham

Date: 5/15/2019 12:13:00 AM

Beautiful sonnet Heidi, love the imagery. Good luck. Tom

Heidi Sands
Date: 5/15/2019 7:29:00 AM

Thank you very much Tom. I appreciate your comments always :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 5/14/2019 5:18:00 PM

Indeed the field is colored by sun's flame..and there is mystery beyond the mountains..nature scene from the photo found its way in your words..well done, Heidi. All the best!

Heidi Sands
Date: 5/14/2019 5:19:00 PM

Thank you very much Vijay. Your comment means a lot to me :)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 5/14/2019 5:17:00 PM

Oh this is glorious Heidi! You were able to incorporate your first and last line seamlessly in this beautiful sonnet Heidi. This will certainly be on his winning list! xxoo : )

Heidi Sands
Date: 5/14/2019 5:18:00 PM

Thank you so much Connie. I appreciate your feedback :)