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are diffused
pointillist view
the makings of things
reds    yellows   greens     and browns
in patch-dots of bright color
summer ends and autumn begins
a time which is both joyful and sad
death    but deep down    god’s promise of rebirth

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Date: 9/19/2010 12:02:00 PM
Enjoyed stopping by to say hi while reading your poetry, have yourself a wonderful day full of love & joy. Keep them smiles coming*luv ~SKAT
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Date: 9/17/2010 10:37:00 AM
Rebirth sounds good right now. enjoyed reading today! glad you liked my senile mother in law is going insane/senile and that conversation is exactly like talking to her....she constantly sees dead folks and they spend the night with sad.
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Date: 9/13/2010 10:48:00 AM
This write of yours Daver...I sat back and started dreaming , heavely, of our earth, and its beauty....and and and *smiles* great poem Sir ! james
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Date: 9/13/2010 9:45:00 AM
Great expressive write that is both descriptive and faith based.Glad that I chose this one to read today..I enjoyed reading your comments on my work about the beans.They say that one can start with a small amount chew it well and drink water and train your body to accept the beans or gassie foods.Unless you have some enzyme missing that helps to digest these kinds of foods.Some people do..Maybe a little "Bean-0" would help.But if you can't tolerate them there is some much food to choose from..Sk
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Date: 9/13/2010 9:21:00 AM
Good morning, Daver! A pointless view, wow! that sounds very sad, Daver. But, your ending makes lots of sense. Enjoyed your etheree, have a bright and shining view of all the wonderful colors out there~luv,..LeeAnn
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Date: 9/13/2010 8:04:00 AM
As to religious fanatics, everyone should be very afraid, anyone who thinks the only way to God is his/or her own way belittles the abilities of God. And shows his/her own prejudice. Light & Love Always
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Date: 9/12/2010 5:59:00 PM
Very interesting thoughts you have penned on Nature study. Nice observations, daver
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Date: 9/12/2010 3:38:00 PM
Very creative, Daver, seeing the colors of fall in pointillistic style like some of the great old painters. Excellent etheree, dear friend. Still having some health problems, but hanging in there and trying to resolve them. Just got home from a long fishing trip. Love you, Carolyn
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Date: 9/12/2010 11:12:00 AM
I bet you like Seurat ! Let me know the name & if you have your books printed up and how to buy one so I can add you to the list! Light & Love
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Date: 9/12/2010 10:02:00 AM
Awesome, Daver, you are getting so good with etheree!! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 9/12/2010 9:59:00 AM
very well stated, flowing, thank you, chuck
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Date: 9/12/2010 9:44:00 AM
Really lovely expression of the glory and some sadness that is change..Take care~Deb
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Date: 9/12/2010 8:30:00 AM
lovely, much enjoyed
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Date: 9/12/2010 8:14:00 AM
Dave another gem with so much truth, when things change they come with sadness and joy, you've captured that, with the promise of God as a surety, love Wilma
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