Nature Study

Appendages whirr
Unto vascular poach
Accelerando poco a poco
Perpetually duo
Maximum roil
Duo diptera
Electrica!
Tiny furry feet
Skinny long legged
Encircle

Flies also make love
SO WHAT!!!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Curcio Avatar
February 22, 2009 at 12:04 PM
LOL! Muscaria Musique!
Winter Avatar
February 22, 2009 at 6:48 AM
Ha! To say you have a way with words is putting it mildly!!! Stacey's comment cracks me up! Good one Daver! Love, Shar
Reynolds Avatar
February 21, 2009 at 12:26 PM
HA, so what indeed. lol check your soupmail. :)
Loving Iii Avatar
February 20, 2009 at 1:44 PM
fasinated by the "Electrica!" the climax should be electric, down to the heels. jhl
Devonshire Avatar
February 19, 2009 at 10:13 PM
Oh, Daver, shame on you for letting the flies creep up on me. I didn't know where you were going, but I had a great laugh at the end! Thanks, Carolyn
Jordan Avatar
February 18, 2009 at 3:49 PM
Daver - Loved this poem - Most people never realize that making love really has very little to do with love itself - God Bless, MJ
Golden Avatar
February 18, 2009 at 12:45 PM
Haha! Love this concept, Daver! Hugs, Donna
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