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Nature Study

Appendages whirr Unto vascular poach Accelerando poco a poco Perpetually duo Maximum roil Duo diptera Electrica! Tiny furry feet Skinny long legged Encircle Flies also make love SO WHAT!!!

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Corinne Curcio

Date: 2/22/2009 12:04:00 PM

LOL! Muscaria Musique!

Sharon Winter

Date: 2/22/2009 6:48:00 AM

Ha! To say you have a way with words is putting it mildly!!! Stacey's comment cracks me up! Good one Daver! Love, Shar

Kristin Reynolds

Date: 2/21/2009 12:26:00 PM

HA, so what indeed. lol check your soupmail. :)

John Loving Iii

Date: 2/20/2009 1:44:00 PM

fasinated by the "Electrica!" the climax should be electric, down to the heels. jhl

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/19/2009 10:13:00 PM

Oh, Daver, shame on you for letting the flies creep up on me. I didn't know where you were going, but I had a great laugh at the end! Thanks, Carolyn

Michael Jordan

Date: 2/18/2009 3:49:00 PM

Daver - Loved this poem - Most people never realize that making love really has very little to do with love itself - God Bless, MJ

Donna Golden

Date: 2/18/2009 12:45:00 PM

Haha! Love this concept, Daver! Hugs, Donna