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Appendages whirr Unto vascular poach Accelerando poco a poco Perpetually duo Maximum roil Duo diptera Electrica! Tiny furry feet Skinny long legged Encircle Flies also make love SO WHAT!!!

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Date: 2/22/2009 12:04:00 PM
LOL! Muscaria Musique!
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Date: 2/22/2009 6:48:00 AM
Ha! To say you have a way with words is putting it mildly!!! Stacey's comment cracks me up! Good one Daver! Love, Shar
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Date: 2/21/2009 12:26:00 PM
HA, so what indeed. lol check your soupmail. :)
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Date: 2/20/2009 1:44:00 PM
fasinated by the "Electrica!" the climax should be electric, down to the heels. jhl
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Date: 2/19/2009 10:13:00 PM
Oh, Daver, shame on you for letting the flies creep up on me. I didn't know where you were going, but I had a great laugh at the end! Thanks, Carolyn
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Date: 2/18/2009 3:49:00 PM
Daver - Loved this poem - Most people never realize that making love really has very little to do with love itself - God Bless, MJ
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Date: 2/18/2009 12:45:00 PM
Haha! Love this concept, Daver! Hugs, Donna
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