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Nature Scene-Orphan Sonnet-Summer Park

Eyes of God shine bright through trees on the left;
Trail’s that wave’s concrete wet from evening rains;
Dark tree branch of active signs of arrest;
Custody beauty verdant green leaves veins;

Visions of green layered high left to right;
Emerald arouses opens my eyes;
Into skies brilliant colors floral lights,
visions attractive plants purple baptize;

None here except flowers you and I God;
Garden your air I breathe gives so freely;
Green ever so cleans the earthen lands sod;
Found heaven surreal ideally;

My spirit soul awes! For God’s garden breathe;
Eyes of God shine bright through trees on the left;



6/24/19

Placed 7th place in Contest
For NA re-run Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: John Hamilton 

Originally For Nature Scene-Orphan Sonnet Poetry Contest date 6/8/19
Enter Sonnet poetry form only
Sponsored by: Dale Gregory Cozart
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Ashley Avatar
July 9, 2019 at 9:25 PM
A sonnet of such beautiful appreciation, James. Glorious imagery. Congratulations on your wonderful recognition in the contest. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
Krutsinger Avatar
June 9, 2019 at 3:45 AM
Beautiful write, James. Good luck in the contest. Sonnets are never easy to write!
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