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Nature Saves the Day

"Just living is not enough. One must have sunshine, freedom, and a little flower." Hans Christian Andersen NATURE SAVES THE DAY The raven splendor of the woods — fathomless birth of birds in song. I’ve lost myself. I’ve found silence of mortal vows - can do no wrong. Breathless the cadence of freedom — my feet wrapped in wondrous blisters. The bears tip their hats, admire me. Arcadian does are my sisters. Beautiful emerald green folk — the shadow’d forest canopy. My hair glistens after its soak — loud petrichor and dripping leaves. Thread of my dream like golden wings as my nightmare lays next to me — I tiptoe first steps into the dark. Scissors cut battered apron strings. Serenity’s gate on a horse. A salvaged heart awaits a prince. Sincere eyes ready for a bride. Thwarted thistles of providence. 3/1/2020 Writing Prompt - Ten Words Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Dear Heart Word List: thread, heart, silence, hair, beautiful, dark, green, birds, fathomless, breathless

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Date: 3/11/2020 1:59:00 AM
Imagination at the best... Wonderful win dear poet..
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/11/2020 7:24:00 AM
Thank you, Jenish!
Date: 3/11/2020 12:26:00 AM
Kim, so delicate, so full of fantasy images. Congratulations on your win. Nice weaving of the required words.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/11/2020 7:25:00 AM
Thank you, Sam!
Date: 3/10/2020 5:58:00 PM
Kim, congratulations on your win in my contest with this lovely poem and thank you for taking part _Constance
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/10/2020 9:32:00 PM
Thank you, Constance! It was fun!
Date: 3/2/2020 2:59:00 AM
Breathtaking piece of work Well done Kim!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/2/2020 5:38:00 AM
Thank you, Rercy!
Date: 3/1/2020 6:16:00 PM
Phenomenal and best wishes Panagiota xx
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/1/2020 7:21:00 PM
Thank you, my friend!
Date: 3/1/2020 5:07:00 PM
wow, amazing imagery you used with her words, Kim. This is sure to get a HIGH placement, at least in MY book!!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/1/2020 5:29:00 PM
Thanks so much, sweet friend!
Date: 3/1/2020 2:56:00 PM
The voice of your poem is so beautiful!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/1/2020 5:30:00 PM
Thank you, my friend!

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