Nature Saves the Day

"Just living is not enough. One must have sunshine,
freedom, and a little flower."     Hans Christian Andersen                 

NATURE SAVES THE DAY

    The raven splendor of the woods —
fathomless birth of birds in song.
                 I’ve lost myself. I’ve found silence
            of mortal vows - can do no wrong.

Breathless the cadence of freedom —
      my feet wrapped in wondrous blisters.
The bears tip their hats, admire me.
Arcadian does are my sisters.

Beautiful emerald green folk —
               the shadow’d forest canopy.
         My hair glistens after its soak —
loud petrichor and dripping leaves.

Thread of my dream like golden wings
     as my nightmare lays next to me —
     I tiptoe first steps into the dark.
Scissors cut battered apron strings.

               Serenity’s gate on a horse.
            A salvaged heart awaits a prince.
Sincere eyes ready for a bride.
     Thwarted thistles of providence.

3/1/2020
Writing Prompt - Ten Words Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Dear Heart

Word List: thread, heart, silence, hair, beautiful,
dark, green, birds, fathomless, breathless
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Somadas Avatar
March 11, 2020 at 1:59 AM
Imagination at the best... Wonderful win dear poet..
Rodrigues Avatar
March 11, 2020 at 7:24 AM
Thank you, Jenish!
Kauffman Avatar
March 11, 2020 at 12:26 AM
Kim, so delicate, so full of fantasy images. Congratulations on your win. Nice weaving of the required words.
Rodrigues Avatar
March 11, 2020 at 7:25 AM
Thank you, Sam!
La France Avatar
March 10, 2020 at 5:58 PM
Kim, congratulations on your win in my contest with this lovely poem and thank you for taking part _Constance
Rodrigues Avatar
March 10, 2020 at 9:32 PM
Thank you, Constance! It was fun!
Zola-Zaba Avatar
March 2, 2020 at 2:59 AM
Breathtaking piece of work Well done Kim!
Rodrigues Avatar
March 2, 2020 at 5:38 AM
Thank you, Rercy!
Romios Avatar
March 1, 2020 at 6:16 PM
Phenomenal and best wishes Panagiota xx
Rodrigues Avatar
March 1, 2020 at 7:21 PM
Thank you, my friend!
Dietrich Avatar
March 1, 2020 at 5:07 PM
wow, amazing imagery you used with her words, Kim. This is sure to get a HIGH placement, at least in MY book!!
Rodrigues Avatar
March 1, 2020 at 5:29 PM
Thanks so much, sweet friend!
Pandit Avatar
March 1, 2020 at 2:56 PM
The voice of your poem is so beautiful!
Rodrigues Avatar
March 1, 2020 at 5:30 PM
Thank you, my friend!
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