Patri Venkata Ramana Poet Rhyme

Nature Park

Gentle breezes caressing and  
                                       taking away the enervation

                                    Mellifluous voices of pretty birds,
                                         a feel of  music concert,
                                        soothing the weary heart.

                                      The aroma of fresh grass scent, 
                                   bubbles of persistent water current, 
                                  verdant valleys with burbling brooks,
                             scurrying dappled fawns and whirling peacocks, 
                               radiant rainbow bridging earth and heaven,
                                the site takes after the vista of the Eden.

                                              cool shadowy spots
                                              lavish villas of fauna
                                             ... the bliss of nature


                        Writing Challenge -Nature, Four in One –
                                          Poetry Contest
                         Sponsored by: Constance La France
                                        Date: 11/09/2020

                                        Placed: 2 nd

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Constance La France September 29, 2020 at 1:29 PM Patri, congratulations on your win in my Nature Four in One Challenge with this wonderful write, a FAV for me _Constance Patri Venkata Ramana October 1, 2020 at 8:05 AM Very happy for the compliments. Thanks a lot.

Jan Allison September 21, 2020 at 3:06 PM i especially loved the third poem Patri, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx Patri Venkata Ramana September 23, 2020 at 6:25 PM Thanks a lot for the compliments.

Anne-Lise Andresen September 21, 2020 at 6:57 AM - This I really enjoy ... beautifully written, Patri :) - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Patri Venkata Ramana September 23, 2020 at 6:24 PM Thanks for the compliments