Audrey Haick Poet Haiku

Nature In the Mix

daffodils---
spring blossoms
happy smiles

periwinkles
blue attire---
blaze like stars


the black hole
grave yard for stars
no headstones---
~*~

2/09/13
Note:  For Gigno's Ellip Contest ( Listed under Haiku Form)

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Jack Horne March 11, 2013 at 3:02 PM love these - especially the black hole

David Williams March 7, 2013 at 1:13 PM belated congrats on your win...David

Tim Ryerson March 6, 2013 at 3:13 PM What a last verse, what a title, what a poem, Annalise!...by the way, I LOVE your first name...My sister's name is Lise...Congratulations - Tim

David Fisher March 5, 2013 at 8:14 AM Way to go on the contest...and dido on the last stanza!

Barbara Gorelick March 5, 2013 at 7:17 AM Tis is just geat..congats .. love how you took to t a unexpected place. BG

Lori Lucas Mcclure March 5, 2013 at 5:05 AM Congratulations on your win with this awesome ellip Annalise! Lori

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl March 5, 2013 at 1:50 AM Congrats on your win Annalise, i couldn't come up with anything for this one, and I am glad I didn't try seeing how good they all were xx

Donna Jones March 4, 2013 at 7:28 PM Awesome talent :-). Congratulations

Debra Squyres March 4, 2013 at 7:00 PM Love these and that last one is just over the top !! Congrats on your win !!

Poet Destroyer A March 4, 2013 at 10:10 AM Annalise, this is a very nice and awesome win... always~ LINDA

Connie Gildersleeve March 4, 2013 at 7:08 AM Sweet poem. Congrats on your win. Connie

Tahera Mannan March 3, 2013 at 9:56 PM Warmest congrats on this super win Anna.

Holly Moore February 16, 2013 at 5:22 AM I really enjoyed your haiku's....all of them were very well written and vivid....thanks for your comments..xx Holly Moore

Joseph May February 11, 2013 at 5:22 PM very nice haiku Annalise...I like the celestial references...hugs

Andrea Dietrich February 11, 2013 at 5:01 PM I like all of these, very creative, but WOW, that last one is amazing.

Harry Horsman February 11, 2013 at 2:07 PM Oh these are so good....

... Gigno February 10, 2013 at 6:09 PM !!!

Charmaine Chircop February 9, 2013 at 10:29 PM i love those periwinkles and daffodls dear.Great haiku indeed.Have a blessed wkend