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Nature In the Mix

daffodils---
spring blossoms
happy smiles

periwinkles
blue attire---
blaze like stars


the black hole
grave yard for stars
no headstones---
~*~

2/09/13
Note:  For Gigno's Ellip Contest ( Listed under Haiku Form)

Copyright © Audrey Haick | Year Posted 2013

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Jack Horne Date: 3/11/2013 3:02:00 PM love these - especially the black hole Login to Reply

David Williams Date: 3/7/2013 1:13:00 PM belated congrats on your win...David Login to Reply

Tim Ryerson Date: 3/6/2013 3:13:00 PM What a last verse, what a title, what a poem, Annalise!...by the way, I LOVE your first name...My sister's name is Lise...Congratulations - Tim Login to Reply

David Fisher Date: 3/5/2013 8:14:00 AM Way to go on the contest...and dido on the last stanza! Login to Reply

Barbara Gorelick Date: 3/5/2013 7:17:00 AM Tis is just geat..congats .. love how you took to t a unexpected place. BG Login to Reply

Lori Lucas Mcclure Date: 3/5/2013 5:05:00 AM Congratulations on your win with this awesome ellip Annalise! Lori Login to Reply

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 3/5/2013 1:50:00 AM Congrats on your win Annalise, i couldn't come up with anything for this one, and I am glad I didn't try seeing how good they all were xx Login to Reply

Donna Jones Date: 3/4/2013 7:28:00 PM Awesome talent :-). Congratulations Login to Reply

Debra Squyres Date: 3/4/2013 7:00:00 PM Love these and that last one is just over the top !! Congrats on your win !! Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 3/4/2013 10:10:00 AM Annalise, this is a very nice and awesome win... always~ LINDA Login to Reply

Connie Gildersleeve Date: 3/4/2013 7:08:00 AM Sweet poem. Congrats on your win. Connie Login to Reply

Tahera Mannan Date: 3/3/2013 9:56:00 PM Warmest congrats on this super win Anna. Login to Reply

Holly Moore Date: 2/16/2013 5:22:00 AM I really enjoyed your haiku's....all of them were very well written and vivid....thanks for your comments..xx Holly Moore Login to Reply

Joseph May Date: 2/11/2013 5:22:00 PM very nice haiku Annalise...I like the celestial references...hugs Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 2/11/2013 5:01:00 PM I like all of these, very creative, but WOW, that last one is amazing. Login to Reply

Harry Horsman Date: 2/11/2013 2:07:00 PM Oh these are so good.... Login to Reply

... Gigno Date: 2/10/2013 6:09:00 PM !!! Login to Reply

Charmaine Chircop Date: 2/9/2013 10:29:00 PM i love those periwinkles and daffodls dear.Great haiku indeed.Have a blessed wkend Login to Reply