Nature In Spring

Trees and shrubs are slowly waking, showing new growth and buds
Crocuses and daffodils are pushing up through the snow and ice
Snow is melting and the grounds are thawing into fresh mud
Eagles and hawks are out soaring in the sky looking for mice 
Goldfinches feeding on seed are appearing more yellow and bright
Spring is a great time to enjoy all of nature's new delights

3/30/19

Writing Challenge 6, 6 Lines Contest

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Marcum Wong Avatar
April 6, 2019 at 12:35 PM
Very lovely Tania and deserving of your top placement! Congratulations! : ) xxoo
Kitchin Avatar
April 6, 2019 at 4:33 PM
Thank you Connie!
Roper Avatar
April 5, 2019 at 3:41 PM
Nicely done verse, Tania, congratulations on your first place win. Hugs Eve ~`*
Kitchin Avatar
April 6, 2019 at 4:33 PM
Thank you Eve!
Cunningham Avatar
April 4, 2019 at 12:44 AM
You've summed spring up so well in six lines , everything coming to life again. Back with congrats on your win. Tom.
Kitchin Avatar
April 4, 2019 at 4:31 AM
Thank you Tom!
La France Avatar
April 3, 2019 at 12:13 PM
Tania, congratulations on your win in my contest with these beautifully penned rhyming lines ~
Kitchin Avatar
April 3, 2019 at 2:45 PM
Constance, thank you and thank you for my awesome placement in your contest!
Andresen Avatar
April 3, 2019 at 4:11 AM
- A beautiful winning poem Tania, congratulations on your 1st place in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Kitchin Avatar
April 3, 2019 at 4:47 AM
Thank you Anne-Lise!
Kiser Avatar
April 2, 2019 at 12:48 PM
Yes it is; there are so many; beautifully described.
Kitchin Avatar
April 2, 2019 at 3:02 PM
Thank you!
Godwin Avatar
April 2, 2019 at 11:43 AM
Yes, it is! How I love Spring and your lines woke her up beautifully! All the best in the contest and all else. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
Kitchin Avatar
April 2, 2019 at 3:00 PM
Thank you CayCay
Andresen Avatar
April 1, 2019 at 5:45 AM
- Beautifully written about nature and spring, Tania - I have chosen the same theme, spring is my favorite time :) - Best wishes in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Kitchin Avatar
April 1, 2019 at 4:20 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise! :)
Cunningham Avatar
March 31, 2019 at 12:45 AM
Lovely verse Tania, the return of a welcome spring, good luck. Tom.
Kitchin Avatar
March 31, 2019 at 5:13 AM
Thank you Tom!
Sands Avatar
March 30, 2019 at 8:12 AM
A beautiful awakening, spring poem. Well done :)
Kitchin Avatar
March 30, 2019 at 4:15 PM
Thank you Heidi!
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