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Nature Haiku I

Tall, whispering trees Yellowing leaves spiraling In the morning wind

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 8/30/2017 8:29:00 AM
Makes me feel like i am right there listening. Thanks for your comment!
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 9/7/2017 12:43:00 PM
Welcome, Karen. There is nothing like sound of nature *^_^*
Date: 7/3/2017 5:20:00 AM
In our case it is the blossoms on the shower trees that are bright yellow. This is a stunner Teddy! : )
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 7/5/2017 3:53:00 PM
Thank you so much, Connie!! *^_^*
Date: 6/26/2017 11:29:00 PM
A lovely little scene in this lovely little haiku, Teddy.
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 7/2/2017 6:34:00 AM
Thanks so much, Carole!! *^_^*
Date: 6/26/2017 7:12:00 AM
This is beautiful Teddy! It can be just like that :)
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 7/2/2017 6:33:00 AM
Yes, Heidi. Thank you so much!! *^_^*
Date: 6/26/2017 6:56:00 AM
beautiful haiku Teddy:-) hugs jan xx
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 7/2/2017 6:33:00 AM
Thank you so much, Jan!! *^_^*

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