Nature Haiku I

Tall, whispering trees
Yellowing leaves spiraling
In the morning wind
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Croft Avatar
August 30, 2017 at 8:29 AM
Makes me feel like i am right there listening. Thanks for your comment!
Kimathi Avatar
September 7, 2017 at 12:43 PM
Welcome, Karen. There is nothing like sound of nature *^_^*
Marcum Wong Avatar
July 3, 2017 at 5:20 AM
In our case it is the blossoms on the shower trees that are bright yellow. This is a stunner Teddy! : )
Kimathi Avatar
July 5, 2017 at 3:53 PM
Thank you so much, Connie!! *^_^*
Duet Avatar
June 26, 2017 at 11:29 PM
A lovely little scene in this lovely little haiku, Teddy.
Kimathi Avatar
July 2, 2017 at 6:34 AM
Thanks so much, Carole!! *^_^*
Sands Avatar
June 26, 2017 at 7:12 AM
This is beautiful Teddy! It can be just like that :)
Kimathi Avatar
July 2, 2017 at 6:33 AM
Yes, Heidi. Thank you so much!! *^_^*
Allison Avatar
June 26, 2017 at 6:56 AM
beautiful haiku Teddy:-) hugs jan xx
Kimathi Avatar
July 2, 2017 at 6:33 AM
Thank you so much, Jan!! *^_^*
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