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Nature Haiku

cleaving the black rock the proud tree blocks wayfarers --- wild shrubs hail the show ? speeding naughty yacht tears white skirts of green waters --- questioning her course ? silver waterfalls like an Indian widow --- on a shadow walk ? rays of morning sun play hide and seek with blossoms --- breeze busy with trees ? though not autumn time ferocious maple leaves fall --- wind escapes from blames 02 August 2022

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Date: 8/9/2022 7:56:00 PM
A beautiful set of Haiku Christuraj, I love "rays of morning sun play hide and seek with blossoms" ...
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 8/9/2022 9:18:00 PM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Date: 8/9/2022 1:22:00 PM
I love how you used metaphor in this set of Haiku. So nice, Chris!
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Date: 8/9/2022 9:18:00 PM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Date: 8/6/2022 3:23:00 PM
Wonderful exhibit of excellent Haikus, Christuraj. They were all exquisite Haikus, my friend. I love the way you used action words in them. A FAV for my collection. Thanks for sharing your immense gift of poetry. A poet friend in Texas, Bill
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 8/9/2022 9:18:00 PM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Date: 8/3/2022 6:09:00 AM
The most intriguing was haiku 3!
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Date: 8/3/2022 6:18:00 AM
Thank you very much.

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