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Nature Haiku

On a cool spring day
Dolphins do amazing flips~
as a boat sails by












3-15-19
Contest: Writing Challenge 2- Haiku
Sponsor: Dear Heart

Copyright © Alexis Y. | Year Posted 2019

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April 7, 2019 at 9:55 PM

Lovely image, Alexis, giving us readers room to ponder (what all those people on that boat sailing by are doing/thinking...). Nicely done haiku! :) gw

Jennifer Proxenos

April 1, 2019 at 1:58 AM

Hi Alexis, Love dolphins, always see then when we go on holiday to the North Coast of Durban. Haven't heard from you in a while - concerned - hope all is well. Poetry hugs, Jenny

April 1, 2019 at 2:02 AM

I love to watch dolphins. They are such a sight to see. I appreciate you being concerned my friend. No worries I'm just taking a break and spending time with the family. I will talk to you soon:-) Alexis

March 28, 2019 at 4:58 PM

Lovely...wish I were in that boat, Alexis! Watching dolphins at play is always awesome. ~ Regards // paul

March 28, 2019 at 12:04 AM

Enjoyed the nice haiku. Best wishes

Andrea Dietrich

March 26, 2019 at 6:36 PM

Love seeing it again in the present tense!

Caren Krutsinger

March 19, 2019 at 1:13 AM

I stare in amazement at the image your have brought to me in this poem, Alexis.

Andrea Dietrich

March 17, 2019 at 5:03 PM

a cool picture of it. I suggest changing sailed to the present tense sails!

March 16, 2019 at 8:22 PM

Cool...spring...amazing...flips - the way your words weave! Nicely done.

March 15, 2019 at 6:03 PM

I can picture this scene so clearly as I’ve seen it a time or two! Good luck in the contest, Alexis! :)

March 15, 2019 at 2:52 PM

Your beautiful Haiku took me to another place, thank you Alexis, with kindest thoughts Ann xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

March 15, 2019 at 1:41 PM

- I've swam with dolphins .... will never forget it :) - Lovely haiku, Alexis :) - Best wishes in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Carolyn Devonshire

March 15, 2019 at 1:14 PM

What a delightful image, Alexis. We used to see dolphins often when boating. Best wishes in Dear Heart's contest! Hugs, Carolyn

Michelle Faulkner

March 15, 2019 at 1:02 PM

I love watching dolphins, they are so graceful, as is your haiku!

March 15, 2019 at 12:33 PM

I've seen a pod off our coast last year, lovely haiku Alexis:-) hugs jan xx

March 15, 2019 at 11:45 AM

Lovely image Alexis, saw some.last year off Gibraltar, amazing creatures. Good luck. Tom.

James Edward Lee Sr.

March 15, 2019 at 11:33 AM

~nice write, Alexis Y.~ :) James

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