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Nature Haiku

On a cool spring day Dolphins do amazing flips~ as a boat sails by 3-15-19 Contest: Writing Challenge 2- Haiku Sponsor: Dear Heart

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Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/7/2019 9:55:00 PM
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Lovely image, Alexis, giving us readers room to ponder (what all those people on that boat sailing by are doing/thinking...). Nicely done haiku! :) gw
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Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 4/1/2019 1:58:00 AM
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Hi Alexis, Love dolphins, always see then when we go on holiday to the North Coast of Durban. Haven't heard from you in a while - concerned - hope all is well. Poetry hugs, Jenny
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Alexis Y.
Date: 4/1/2019 2:02:00 AM
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I love to watch dolphins. They are such a sight to see. I appreciate you being concerned my friend. No worries I'm just taking a break and spending time with the family. I will talk to you soon:-) Alexis
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Paul Callus
Date: 3/28/2019 4:58:00 PM
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Lovely...wish I were in that boat, Alexis! Watching dolphins at play is always awesome. ~ Regards // paul
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Anisha Dutta
Date: 3/28/2019 12:04:00 AM
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Enjoyed the nice haiku. Best wishes
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 3/26/2019 6:36:00 PM
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Love seeing it again in the present tense!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/19/2019 1:13:00 AM
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I stare in amazement at the image your have brought to me in this poem, Alexis.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 3/17/2019 5:03:00 PM
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a cool picture of it. I suggest changing sailed to the present tense sails!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/16/2019 8:22:00 PM
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Cool...spring...amazing...flips - the way your words weave! Nicely done.
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Laura Leiser
Date: 3/15/2019 6:03:00 PM
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I can picture this scene so clearly as I’ve seen it a time or two! Good luck in the contest, Alexis! :)
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 3/15/2019 2:52:00 PM
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Your beautiful Haiku took me to another place, thank you Alexis, with kindest thoughts Ann xx
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/15/2019 1:41:00 PM
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- I've swam with dolphins .... will never forget it :) - Lovely haiku, Alexis :) - Best wishes in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 3/15/2019 1:14:00 PM
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What a delightful image, Alexis. We used to see dolphins often when boating. Best wishes in Dear Heart's contest! Hugs, Carolyn
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 3/15/2019 1:02:00 PM
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I love watching dolphins, they are so graceful, as is your haiku!
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Jan Allison
Date: 3/15/2019 12:33:00 PM
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I've seen a pod off our coast last year, lovely haiku Alexis:-) hugs jan xx
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 3/15/2019 11:45:00 AM
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Lovely image Alexis, saw some.last year off Gibraltar, amazing creatures. Good luck. Tom.
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James Edward Lee Sr.
Date: 3/15/2019 11:33:00 AM
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~nice write, Alexis Y.~ :) James
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