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Nature From My Bedroom

Curved branches of flame tree Tiny, tender new born leaves Bright orange flowers on the backdrop of blue sky Mynah swings Crow sits statue, staring Dove, robin peck on flowers Carpet of orange on brown mud Ground below white jasmine plant covered by orange flowers Sparrows chirp continuously Cuckoo sings in melodious, rhythmic voice Parrots fly in groups screeching Sky turns orange Red sun slides down to other side of mountain to sleep Cool breeze blows Sky becomes dark Moons smiles, stars shine Moonlight in bedroom Heaven on earth 27.04.2021 Placed 1st in Brain Strand contest Note : First picture taken from window

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Date: 4/26/2021 12:09:00 PM
Hello Rama, Wow! For me this is a beautiful scene. I hear the sparrows I hear different birds in the early morning. Blessings my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/27/2021 11:18:00 AM
Hello Rama, thank you for this lovely comment. I am pleased that my comment makes you smile and happy. I will . You do the same my friend.
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Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 4/27/2021 8:25:00 AM
Thanks Darlene. Your comments always bring a smile in my face and make me happy. Thanks. Have a great day ahead friend. God bless you! Take care, Rama
Date: 4/26/2021 12:00:00 PM
Superb verses, everyone has his one vibration, and they are tightly connected, Is gazing at the stars in your bedroom a spiritual ritual?? Have a great day, Rama
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Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 4/27/2021 8:24:00 AM
No, I do believe God is everything, everywhere. Spiritualism for me is thoughtless mind at work in hand. Thanks for reading and commenting. Have a great day ahead. Take care, Rama

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