Nature Fm

Filmy fern unfurling its fronds
In a miniature moorland of moss
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Reynolds Avatar
November 4, 2008 at 2:43 AM
Sounds like my back yard. fascinating fern philosophy. :) Kristin
Suzadail Jr. Avatar
November 3, 2008 at 5:46 PM
Pretty perfect presentation, Poet. Vince
Richards Avatar
November 3, 2008 at 4:13 PM
Say that fast 10 times.....betcha can't do it!! Smile :) Carrie
Degenhardt Avatar
November 3, 2008 at 12:37 PM
Though it's not exactly a lanterne I do like the use of alliteration and the imagery created. It makes for a short verse but a wonderful read. Michael
Higgins Avatar
November 3, 2008 at 10:42 AM
A wonderful imagery Nigel.
Gorelick Avatar
November 3, 2008 at 10:41 AM
Another form I've never tried..I like it! Thanks for the "oops" catch on my spelling. BG
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