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Written: December 07, 2023 ______________________________________ An art display with free and delightful assets, Blemishes and brightness of nature are blatant Confusingly gorgeous and full of magic and wonder Digging deep down the dictum draws a drain. Earth apex joins the sky peak to heal man's soul Fathom thrills in its primal vogue as chaos Gorgeous greenery coiled in your rippling blade Hobble with a brisk ember for fall indulgence It seems that nature is the most visually enticing. Jewel blooms in a savored indigo whisk breeze Kissing spite swirled, swaying spritz and sunlight Levitate into the hills tidings; peace will reach you, Mercurial avian melodies mingled in a zephyr swell. Numb tears as marigolds sprout in the dawning sun Observe nature in a gladsome way and appreciate it Parasol arose in the blissful glory of glorious wile Quintessence infuses both lost and found creations. Remember, when the seasons alter and rain falls, Sunshine and steel drum bands hug periwinkle sky. Tender, rich maple-scented trees swirl with the wind Uncork while chirping with birds to relieve stress Vegetal forms decay, die, or are rudimentary. Wail with a willow whisper whisked wind wilting Xenoliths lack implies peridotite-eclogite connect Yodeling, bird song disguise, and stage presence Zenith inhales, exhales, fresh air renews your spirit.

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Date: 12/16/2023 10:59:00 AM
A delightful use of the form Sotto.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest.
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Date: 12/8/2023 4:30:00 PM
Loved this! Nature does speak in your work, like you're writing of. You are such a gifted soul!
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Date: 12/8/2023 2:38:00 PM
Ahh!! Reads like a good contender for the contest. Way to go. Thanks for sharing this one with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K
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Date: 12/7/2023 10:24:00 PM
This is a wonderful abecedarian, not something easy. But for you it is as easy as ABC. In a master's hand, even the most difficult work yields. Nature with its mesmerizing scenes and sights are brought and made alive before our eyes. All the Best dear friend.
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Date: 12/7/2023 2:16:00 PM
dearest Sotto--an outstanding Abecedarian filled with magnificent, breathtaking imagery. I admire your skill in creating a unique poem that truly captures nature's delight. You're right, nature is the most visually enticing...it's certainly full of inspiration. I especially liked: 'Numb tears as marigolds sprout in the dawning sun.' That line and the whole verse alludes to the healing power within our observation of nature. Truly stunning, Sotto. Faving. Your poetess friend in Texas, Sara
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Date: 12/7/2023 12:36:00 PM
Splendid imagery of nature skillfully woven delightful sights and sounds, my friend. A FAVE for this long poem effortlessly executed in cheerful vocabulary.
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Date: 12/7/2023 10:57:00 AM
Great poem on a difficult format. Thoughts and nature are well represented.
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Date: 12/7/2023 9:56:00 AM
What a well written abcedarian dr sotto. I absolutely love the way you’ve expressed so many thoughts here and i agree with nature line. We feel so much and heal through nature too and i love the creative use of the last letters, what you’ve created with them is beyond impeccable. Such a deep and profound write. You do every form just effortlessly. In such an eloquent manner. And this one flows so beautifully.such brilliant diction and lines to ponder on. Im sure will do very well, goodluck
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Date: 12/7/2023 9:46:00 AM
good attempt with this difficult form Sotto you did it proud hugs Shadow
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