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Nature At Fault

Down, creepers for gourds; Up, branches for olives...lo! an olive falls on my nose! 10/10/16 Funny one liner by Silent One Judged 11/10/16 - Placed 8

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/13/2016 8:00:00 AM

So glad it placed (from your comment below) CONGRATS

Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 12/14/2016 5:22:00 AM

Thanks My dear friend...nice preparation for a merry xmas! :)

Yasemin Balandi

Date: 10/18/2016 3:42:00 AM

Lovely :). Thanks for your comment on my poem: Lost In WaterXXX

Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 10/22/2016 11:19:00 PM

Thanks for the visit. It was a pleasure reading your poem. All the best. :)

Joseph May

Date: 10/15/2016 9:30:00 AM

Congrats on your win Sunita!

Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 10/22/2016 11:18:00 PM

Thanks Joseph and all the best! :)

Teddy Kimathi

Date: 10/14/2016 4:53:00 AM

Congrats Sunita, for your WIN in the contest!! ;-)

Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 10/14/2016 6:23:00 AM

Thanks Teddy. All the best.:)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/13/2016 7:41:00 PM

Hey, Congratulations, Sunita!!

Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 10/14/2016 6:22:00 AM

:D Thanks to you!Best regards S

Yasemin Balandi

Date: 10/13/2016 5:01:00 AM

wonderful.

Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 10/14/2016 6:21:00 AM

Thanks for the visit. :)

Beejadhur Sewumber

Date: 10/13/2016 5:00:00 AM

nicely written, very symbolic. Sewumber.

Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 10/14/2016 6:21:00 AM

Thanks for the friendly visit. All the best. :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/11/2016 12:53:00 AM

GREAT ending. I hope you can shorten it up. He wants only one l line. Maybe you could say gourd creepers and olive branches to fit it all on one line!!

Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 10/12/2016 10:19:00 AM

Thanks again for your valuable support. This is placed! X]

Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 10/11/2016 3:37:00 AM

Thanks for read and suggestion. I tried to work out it again. Hope it sounds better and keep the meaning, as I explained to Victor (comment below). :) Sunita