Nature and Adulation

The petals had spread out in response to the light. Pay heed to the timberland in your mind for melodies. Glance at exquisite first light with a feeling of serenity. Feelings are akin to fluffy wings that can soar over the sky. The sight gleamed as if it were lauding itself anew. Our adoration center was quiet and warm in its sense.
Second Place Contest Winner Written: July 13, 2021 Bite Size Poem No12 Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Line Gauthier
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Balasubramanian Avatar
July 15, 2021 at 10:36 AM
Congratulations
Poet Avatar
July 15, 2021 at 12:14 PM
Thank you so much Rama
Alex Avatar
July 15, 2021 at 4:04 AM
Feelings are akin to fluffy wings that can soar over the sky. Well Written. Congratulations!
Poet Avatar
July 15, 2021 at 12:15 PM
Thanks, Alex, appreciate that.
Balasubramanian Avatar
July 14, 2021 at 8:24 AM
Lovely poem. So many wonderful lines. The exquisite beauty and feelings expressed in your poem fills me with much bliss. Thanks
Buhagiar Avatar
July 14, 2021 at 1:30 AM
Peaceful and full of love. What better ingredients do we need.
Rose  Avatar
July 13, 2021 at 12:47 PM
Ah, I like the idea of an adoration center. You are so creative dear poet. :)
Poet Avatar
July 13, 2021 at 1:07 PM
Thanks for your delightful comment, dear Rose. Have a great afternoon,// hugs
Andresen Avatar
July 13, 2021 at 12:45 PM
- Lovely feeling of serenity, Las - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Poet Avatar
July 13, 2021 at 1:08 PM
Thank you very much, dear Anne-Lise, your sweet words are always uplifting//Have a wonderful afternoon
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