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Nature and Adulation

The petals had spread out in response to the light. Pay heed to the timberland in your mind for melodies. Glance at exquisite first light with a feeling of serenity. Feelings are akin to fluffy wings that can soar over the sky. The sight gleamed as if it were lauding itself anew. Our adoration center was quiet and warm in its sense.
Second Place Contest Winner Written: July 13, 2021 Bite Size Poem No12 Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Line Gauthier

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Date: 7/15/2021 10:36:00 AM
Congratulations
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Date: 7/15/2021 12:14:00 PM
Thank you so much Rama
Date: 7/15/2021 4:04:00 AM
Feelings are akin to fluffy wings that can soar over the sky. Well Written. Congratulations!
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Date: 7/15/2021 12:15:00 PM
Thanks, Alex, appreciate that.
Date: 7/14/2021 8:24:00 AM
Lovely poem. So many wonderful lines. The exquisite beauty and feelings expressed in your poem fills me with much bliss. Thanks
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Date: 7/14/2021 1:30:00 AM
Peaceful and full of love. What better ingredients do we need.
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Date: 7/13/2021 12:47:00 PM
Ah, I like the idea of an adoration center. You are so creative dear poet. :)
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Date: 7/13/2021 1:07:00 PM
Thanks for your delightful comment, dear Rose. Have a great afternoon,// hugs
Date: 7/13/2021 12:45:00 PM
- Lovely feeling of serenity, Las - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/13/2021 1:08:00 PM
Thank you very much, dear Anne-Lise, your sweet words are always uplifting//Have a wonderful afternoon

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