Nature

Snow laden mountains -
  Sun sparkles like diamonds
  on icy cold loch

  Heart leaps with joy - 
  playful otter is crowned by
  bejewelled water
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Pettit Avatar
January 22, 2014 at 5:37 PM
Again, you must be describing scenery of Scotland here. Another good write.
Dietrich Avatar
December 7, 2013 at 8:10 PM
so pretty!!
Cavanaugh Avatar
November 21, 2013 at 11:12 PM
I don't know if I have welcomed you to the soup yet. So welcome dear one. You write very good haikus.
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