Nature

Cacophonous crow Raucously robbing robins Pandemonium Salivating snail Predator of petunias Duck delicacy Sweet Spring surprises Doe dining delicately Nature nourishes Hungry hawk hovers Quiet quail quakes and quivers Corn cover conceals

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Debbie Guzzi

Date: 3/29/2010 4:32:00 PM

loved the originallity of these small gems! Light & Love

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/13/2010 7:56:00 AM

Incredible use of alliteration to paint pictures of the animals, Joyce. Well done in haiku form! Love, Carolyn

Brian Strand

Date: 3/13/2010 12:30:00 AM

Thank you for supporting my contest Joyce.Rgds Brian

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/12/2010 8:48:00 PM

Cool alliteration, Joyce. I'm going thru poets I have not seen in a while trying to update things, and I am glad to think of you! LUv, Andrea

Marty Owens

Date: 3/12/2010 7:34:00 PM

Very nice Haiku...Enjoyed reading...Marty

Faleshia Murphy

Date: 3/12/2010 7:29:00 PM

VERY NICE I ENJOYED READING THIS KEEP IT UP KEEP IT UP FALESHIA

Carrie Richards

Date: 3/12/2010 7:24:00 PM

Wow!! each one of these could stand on it's own!! Great work, Joyce! :) ~ Carrie