Nature

I opened the window,
the door wide opened.
Temperature scorching,
no fresh air rushing,
environment outside foul.

I rode far
to the countryside 
roads once quiet today busy.
Coming back
my house and room wore
the semblance of nature.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Dietrich Avatar
March 5, 2026 at 11:45 PM
This is so interesting how you gave the house a semblance of nature at the end of day. Great job.
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