Notes About The Poem

Nature

World stills of nature's hospitality
showing modesty and humility.
Sunlight dapples the hill's locality
winking through pines peace and tranquility.

A living, breathing, viability
cascading aquatic agility,
fluttering independent entity,
shine purely within the vicinity.

Dark trees, ferns, await dawn's stability
alive in amazing facility.
Birds sing providing audibility.

Brilliance with mental capability,
My mind's eye exceeds my ability
course the utmost responsibility
becoming a part of me willingly.

Warm seasons ebbing a reality,
winter will follow in servility.



5/27/2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Gentry Avatar
May 27, 2018 at 5:36 PM
Wow, Eve! Beautiful imagery and rhyme. Well done! :)
Turner Avatar
May 27, 2018 at 5:07 PM
Well done on a very challenging form, Eve. Good luck, sweetie!
Sands Avatar
May 27, 2018 at 4:12 PM
Wow Eve. This poem is amazing! Well written :)
Pandit Avatar
May 27, 2018 at 4:09 PM
A lovely poem Eve..full of sights and sounds...hope you win BIG.
Andresen Avatar
May 27, 2018 at 3:04 PM
- Beautifully described with your words, Eve - If it's too contest, I wish you good luck :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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