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World stills of nature's hospitality showing modesty and humility. Sunlight dapples the hill's locality winking through pines peace and tranquility. A living, breathing, viability cascading aquatic agility, fluttering independent entity, shine purely within the vicinity. Dark trees, ferns, await dawn's stability alive in amazing facility. Birds sing providing audibility. Brilliance with mental capability, My mind's eye exceeds my ability course the utmost responsibility becoming a part of me willingly. Warm seasons ebbing a reality, winter will follow in servility. 5/27/2018

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Date: 5/27/2018 5:36:00 PM
Wow, Eve! Beautiful imagery and rhyme. Well done! :)
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Date: 5/27/2018 5:07:00 PM
Well done on a very challenging form, Eve. Good luck, sweetie!
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Date: 5/27/2018 4:12:00 PM
Wow Eve. This poem is amazing! Well written :)
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Date: 5/27/2018 4:09:00 PM
A lovely poem Eve..full of sights and sounds...hope you win BIG.
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Date: 5/27/2018 3:04:00 PM
- Beautifully described with your words, Eve - If it's too contest, I wish you good luck :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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