Natural Walk

Walk softly the pass
Your feet meet our mother earth
Breathing from the grass

Take in the affection
Of your own natural walk
Reaching perfection
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Austin Avatar
November 22, 2016 at 9:30 AM
These are really fine, Cynthia. And fine Haiku are not easy to write. Congrats, daver
A   Avatar
February 3, 2016 at 7:45 PM
enjoyed this haiku Cynthia @-> LINDA <-@
Nance Avatar
September 20, 2014 at 7:31 AM
Peaceful easy feeling, enjoyable and soft, well done :)
Ferguson Avatar
September 20, 2014 at 8:07 AM
thanks , I like to pretend I am a monk high on a mountain, all alone, forever, no one to talk to, so when someone finds me someday they will know what I had to say :)
Chakrabarty Avatar
September 20, 2014 at 7:07 AM
Here Cynthia again with full vigor. Hugs!
Ferguson Avatar
September 20, 2014 at 8:03 AM
thank you I learned haiku here from a very talented poet who gave me a phrase that says so much and is complicated by taking 4 syllables I found it a good test, I hope it is ok to grow haikus out, :) if not then oh well the life of a black sheep :)
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