Sebastian Aaron Baez Poet Free verse

Natural Satellite

orbiting her planet here
in my spacious long distance solitude

this synchronous rotation
only adds to my loneliness
watching her with a
three hundred and sixty five
twenty four seven obsession

peeking around crescents to catch a glimpse
getting attention by rare total momentary eclipse
but occasionally I am fully exposed
to the wonderful sight and beauty of glowing blue hues

there was a time when I was once part of you
you were once part of me
now only a crash course destiny
can bring us together

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Charmaine Chircop October 7, 2014 at 2:41 PM This poem puts a lump in my troath.I love it when you write this way.Adding it tmfvs. Sebastian Aaron Baez October 7, 2014 at 3:40 PM Stop you're making me blush!, wonderful star child. :)

Tim Smith October 7, 2014 at 1:52 PM Love the personification my friend...cheers Tim Sebastian Aaron Baez October 7, 2014 at 2:17 PM Thanks Tim and peter says hello! :) That was too funny my friend.

Skat A October 7, 2014 at 12:59 PM Sebastian, love the poem. Pulling for things to go your way..... SKAT Sebastian Aaron Baez October 7, 2014 at 1:24 PM Thanks SKAT! At first I wasn't going to post this poem but then I said what the hell, do it. :) Still not sure of the title, wanted something different.