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Natural Satellite

orbiting her planet here in my spacious long distance solitude this synchronous rotation only adds to my loneliness watching her with a three hundred and sixty five twenty four seven obsession peeking around crescents to catch a glimpse getting attention by rare total momentary eclipse but occasionally I am fully exposed to the wonderful sight and beauty of glowing blue hues there was a time when I was once part of you you were once part of me now only a crash course destiny can bring us together

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Charmaine Chircop

Date: 10/7/2014 2:41:00 PM

This poem puts a lump in my troath.I love it when you write this way.Adding it tmfvs.

Sebastian Aaron Baez
Date: 10/7/2014 3:40:00 PM

Stop you're making me blush!, wonderful star child. :)

Tim Smith

Date: 10/7/2014 1:52:00 PM

Love the personification my friend...cheers Tim

Sebastian Aaron Baez
Date: 10/7/2014 2:17:00 PM

Thanks Tim and peter says hello! :) That was too funny my friend.

Skat A

Date: 10/7/2014 12:59:00 PM

Sebastian, love the poem. Pulling for things to go your way..... SKAT

Sebastian Aaron Baez
Date: 10/7/2014 1:24:00 PM

Thanks SKAT! At first I wasn't going to post this poem but then I said what the hell, do it. :) Still not sure of the title, wanted something different.