Natural Satellite

orbiting her planet here
in my spacious long distance solitude

this synchronous rotation
only adds to my loneliness
watching her with a
three hundred and sixty five
twenty four seven obsession

peeking around crescents to catch a glimpse
getting attention by rare total momentary eclipse
but occasionally I am fully exposed
to the wonderful sight and beauty of glowing blue hues

there was a time when I was once part of you
you were once part of me
now only a crash course destiny
can bring us together

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 10/7/2014 2:41:00 PM
This poem puts a lump in my troath.I love it when you write this way.Adding it tmfvs.
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Sebastian Aaron Baez
Date: 10/7/2014 3:40:00 PM
Stop you're making me blush!, wonderful star child. :)
Date: 10/7/2014 1:52:00 PM
Love the personification my friend...cheers Tim
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Sebastian Aaron Baez
Date: 10/7/2014 2:17:00 PM
Thanks Tim and peter says hello! :) That was too funny my friend.
Date: 10/7/2014 12:59:00 PM
Sebastian, love the poem. Pulling for things to go your way..... SKAT
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Sebastian Aaron Baez
Date: 10/7/2014 1:24:00 PM
Thanks SKAT! At first I wasn't going to post this poem but then I said what the hell, do it. :) Still not sure of the title, wanted something different.
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