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Natural Fume

frankincense odor fume for worshiping and more fragrance up outer Inspired by dear Susan Ashley's Jasmine Haiku.

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Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 9/22/2023 8:57:00 PM

Lovely images, Abdullah.

Abdullah Alhemaidy
Date: 9/22/2023 10:45:00 PM

Thank you very much, Evelyn with my best and warmest wishes, have a nice day ~AA.

Bill Baker

Date: 9/22/2023 4:58:00 PM

A fine follow up Senryu, Abdullah. Write On! Bill

Abdullah Alhemaidy
Date: 9/22/2023 5:05:00 PM

From AA to BB thank you very much! :-)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/22/2023 11:26:00 AM

- A nice scent... great written, Abdullah :) - hugs

Abdullah Alhemaidy
Date: 9/22/2023 4:01:00 PM

Hello lovely Anne, nice of you too :-) Thank you very much, have a nice day ~AA

Eve Roper

Date: 9/21/2023 11:05:00 PM

I always remember the a sweet-smelling aroma, incense during special occasions at church. Good Senryu.

Abdullah Alhemaidy
Date: 9/22/2023 4:05:00 PM

Hello lovely Eve, Yes, I do have same sweet aromas memories in mosques, churches and temples. Thanks dear Eve with best regards and wishes, have a nice day ~AA