Abe Lopez Poet Haiku

Natural Forces

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                        nature 
intervenes
                                  
atmospheric arrow parts -
                                                
spring kiss prevented
 



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Doris Culverhouse June 19, 2010 at 7:09 PM Reminds me of the power of a missed kiss...that I really wanted.

Poet Destroyer A May 17, 2010 at 9:59 AM well done, strong choice of words to describe a passing by,..p.d.

Barbara Gorelick May 16, 2010 at 9:01 PM That must be why weve had so much rain this spring. Nice one Abe. BG

Dr.Ram Mehta May 16, 2010 at 3:36 AM Nice images aptly interpreted. A real haiku

Charmaine Chircop May 15, 2010 at 10:41 PM Ow my I can feel that atmospheric arrow..great great Haiku with a prevented Kiss,Charma.