Nativity Play

Mary nudged Joseph, busy picking his nose
Baby Jesus sat up from repose
Angel Gabriel’s halo went wonky
And the sheep were kicking the donkey.


21.12.2020
Chastushka Poem.
Christmas Theme.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Allison Avatar
December 27, 2020 at 2:45 PM
this is SO funny I can picture the scene lol, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Roper Avatar
December 27, 2020 at 10:35 AM
Congratulations on your win, Carol. Happy New Year. Hugs Eve
Mcintosh Avatar
December 25, 2020 at 3:22 AM
So cute... Love it :) God B L E S S you and MERRY CHRISTMAS !!! It snowed here - yay.
Mitra Avatar
December 25, 2020 at 3:29 AM
Thanks dear Regina....Merry Christmas to you too...Amazing to see it snow :))
Watt Avatar
December 24, 2020 at 9:36 PM
I agree with Andrea, any parent who has had a kid in a nativity play must keep themselves from busting up with all the mayhem! Great poem, Carol, and congrats on your big #1 win ~ John
Mitra Avatar
December 24, 2020 at 11:18 PM
Thanks dear John...Merry Christmas :)
Dietrich Avatar
December 24, 2020 at 5:18 PM
Carol, this is a hilarious portrayal of kids in a Christmas play. LOVED this. Congrats.
Mitra Avatar
December 24, 2020 at 11:14 PM
Thanks dear Andrea.....much love and hugs :)
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