Nativity of Jesus

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To look upon His face, hold in my craving arms, seek his divine grace and favor. I'd spread my wings and sing a Cherub hymn. The Seraphim angels' harps would strum melodies paying homage to our God's son. 12/1/2019

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 12/12/2019 11:58:00 AM

Hi Eve, This is really quite lovely in its simplicity with beautiful images that eloquently state the theme of your poem. Nice!

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 12/5/2019 4:53:00 AM

This is so gorgeously done Eve!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/4/2019 3:10:00 PM

this is so precious, Eve. I can't see the name on the painting but it looks like one you could have painted!

Ann Foster

Date: 12/3/2019 7:04:00 PM

Lovely. Ann

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 12/2/2019 6:53:00 AM

Amen, stretch them far and wide! Sing his praise. He always pay back more than what we deserve. Be blessed, dear Eve!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/2/2019 3:22:00 AM

- Beautifully written, Eve - (is that your painting?) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper
Date: 12/2/2019 5:57:00 AM

thank you, yes it is one of mine and in my collection .

Na Na

Date: 12/1/2019 11:27:00 PM

Hi Eve Nicely done. I dont think I can do this contest. A little too confusing for me. Best of luck to you. I just did the Pale Shelter one and I dont write poetry like that at all. I hope thats what he was needing. I listen to the song and gave what I thought the song meant. Thanks for sharing this