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Non-contest poem.

 

Bottle, Erase, Wicked, Heart, Gaze, Tender A bottle drifts on waves unknown, Carrying whispers, seeds once sown. In the past, I still tried to speak, Yet tides erase the words it keeps. A wicked fate, both vast and sly, Hides the truth beneath the sky. The heart still longs, it aches, it yearns, As distant stars in silence gaze. No key to open what is sealed, No touch to change what time concealed. Yet on it floats, through night and foam, A tender message lost, yet not alone.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025




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Date: 4/4/2025 9:17:00 AM
Your poetry is lovely, Jay :) — Good luck if it's for the contest!
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Date: 4/1/2025 2:26:00 AM
- A beautiful poem, Jay :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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Date: 3/31/2025 10:28:00 PM
Amazing job with those words, Jay
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Date: 3/31/2025 6:01:00 PM
You sure as sure should put this beauty in the contest. It's a sparkling gem of a shining poem and I was delighted by its content and feel. Yeah, I was ... CayCay
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Date: 3/31/2025 11:29:00 AM
Hello jay, we3lcome back, i think there are many messages in bottles that are nerve found. That is making it unread. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/
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