Notes About The Poem

Written on March 30, 2025

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National Poetry Month


Nouns:(choose two)
River
Heart

Verbs: (choose two)
Shiver
Gaze

Adjectives:(choose two)
Lush
Tender

Words pour from my pores, a river of light
	erasing the shadows of a melancholy
		my thoughts tremble, shiver like dew
whose tender trail across each petal, murmuring
	expressions reflecting off the melody
		lush voice of praise, stirring the heart
who hears the notes of a feeling, blessing away
	the ache, grief stricken memories, in flames
		passionate, convincing with an earnest gaze
her heart feels like liquid, words given to the past
	where fears color her spirit in roaring phrases
		meant to penetrate the life, convincing
each thought brings its victory, a sense of gentling
	whoever hears her words, breaking out of their shell
		compelling souls to listen to the silence
where the wind caresses the stars and invites the moon
	glowing in the blackest of black, night sun
		sending eventual tempting to the nocturnal
who remembers that everything, despite the storms
	will come to hear the voice of One far more alive
		than any word can suggest, more vivid
more vibrant than the skies who prevent the rain’s breath
	realize that His love is like the answer from the sun
		uttering hope, with each trickle of admiration
praise Him… PRAISE HIM… HE IS WORTHY!
	more WORTHY than mere words,
		more WORTHY than every poem
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March 30, 2025 at 9:38 AM
What a wonderful/lovely write you have here. Great Picture... I enjoyed reading it. "Good Luck" We both did this one. Happy Spring Blessings To You As You Write Away.........
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