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Nathan Dilts My Posey

Tattered jeans comfort Morning mental haze Sensual pulses stimulate Smells don't deter Sex, food and laughter Keep it simply rational For Nathan's contest--Thanks for the inspiration today.

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Date: 4/18/2010 1:17:00 PM
Good luck in Nathan's contest.. my write was quite simple "Finale" from my "honey's" poetic point of view.. another exciting contest on the Soup...luv.. Linda-Marie
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Date: 4/17/2010 9:08:00 AM
This one makes one think Doris...Nicely written...God Bless..Taz
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Date: 4/17/2010 4:05:00 AM
Nice writing, Doris! Keeping fingers crossed for your entry in the contest. And thank you for your friendly comments...Now I'm back again on PS with some new Tanka...Have a great time...Gert
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Date: 4/16/2010 7:37:00 AM
Keeping it simple is a style of life for me, Doris. Enjoyed your poem! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/16/2010 6:37:00 AM
Yes I do Doris, I see myself in those words..
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Date: 4/16/2010 6:30:00 AM
You have a great way with expressing Doris. Thanks for the line of mental haze. I woke up like that today. P.D.
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Date: 4/16/2010 6:27:00 AM
lovely words...very much enjoyed
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