Nathan Dilts My Posey

Tattered jeans comfort
Morning mental haze
Sensual pulses stimulate
Smells don't deter
Sex, food and laughter
Keep it simply rational

For Nathan's contest--Thanks for the inspiration today.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Sweetheart Avatar
April 18, 2010 at 1:17 PM
Good luck in Nathan's contest.. my write was quite simple "Finale" from my "honey's" poetic point of view.. another exciting contest on the Soup...luv.. Linda-Marie
Pickett Avatar
April 17, 2010 at 9:08 AM
This one makes one think Doris...Nicely written...God Bless..Taz
Knop Avatar
April 17, 2010 at 4:05 AM
Nice writing, Doris! Keeping fingers crossed for your entry in the contest. And thank you for your friendly comments...Now I'm back again on PS with some new Tanka...Have a great time...Gert
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April 16, 2010 at 7:37 AM
Keeping it simple is a style of life for me, Doris. Enjoyed your poem! Love, Carolyn
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April 16, 2010 at 6:37 AM
Yes I do Doris, I see myself in those words..
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April 16, 2010 at 6:30 AM
You have a great way with expressing Doris. Thanks for the line of mental haze. I woke up like that today. P.D.
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April 16, 2010 at 6:27 AM
lovely words...very much enjoyed
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