Nathan Ate a Cigarrett

Nathan ate a cigarrett, that silly poop
placed it on his lips and soon he shouted "WOOP!"
aparently he wasn't paying any attention to it
didn't seem to realise that the end in his mouth was lit
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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May 5, 2010 at 6:59 PM
A nice characterization
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May 5, 2010 at 1:45 PM
poor Nathan, well done with the image of him swallowing the cig.,enjoyed,..p.d.
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