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Nathan Ate a Cigarrett

Nathan ate a cigarrett, that silly poop placed it on his lips and soon he shouted "WOOP!" aparently he wasn't paying any attention to it didn't seem to realise that the end in his mouth was lit

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 5/5/2010 6:59:00 PM
A nice characterization
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Date: 5/5/2010 1:45:00 PM
poor Nathan, well done with the image of him swallowing the cig.,enjoyed,..p.d.
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