Nathan

...			He was one of the good ones
			The best of the best.
			He had gone into danger
			At his nation’s request.
			He was not there to fight
			Only there to rebuild.
			Too young, and too good
			And too brave to be killed.

			He is one of too many
			Who’ve gone to Iraq
			To help protect freedom
			But will not be back.
			His parents are proud
			To have raised such a one;
			A beautiful, dutiful
			Wonderful son.

			His friends are in tears,
			Their loss is immense,
			That he’s not coming home
			Just doesn’t make sense.
			Some are spared some are taken.
			God only knows why.
			He took our love with him
			When his turn to die.

			12/23/03

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 7/13/2011 11:49:00 PM
this one is sad to me. My old best friend's name is Nathan. We never talk anymore. He is alive and well. Many of my friends are dead, but the great ones who I lose contact with seem to bother my soul just as much.
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Date: 7/13/2011 2:33:00 PM
A most painfull subject and episode you have written on Joyce... i think in the long run it must help.
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Date: 7/13/2011 9:48:00 AM
Congratulations on your 1st place win..I knew this was a winner...
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Date: 7/12/2011 10:26:00 AM
Bringing tears in my eyes.What a tribute to Nathan and our soldiers. You brought out what we all feel. Thank you for these tender but true words.Hugs.
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Date: 7/12/2011 9:44:00 AM
Joyce, you have penned a wonderful write and tribute to this young man and his family. This is a beautiful write, I enjoyed the read~ Caryl
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Date: 7/12/2011 9:42:00 AM
Very touching tribute, beautifully versed together. He`d be so proud of you and this poem .. bless up... paul
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