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Nasty Old Dude

In spite of some recent setbacks I've endured Still, life is the only choice to feel secure Crap's gonna happen Always part of the action But we stick with the program just to be sure

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Lim'Rik Flats

Date: 7/27/2017 7:59:00 AM

Sometimes the program sticks to us//Like when we're under the bus//Can get a bruise//While on this cruise//Called life, but why make a fuss? CRAP ON JACKSON!!! Whoops, that doesn't sound quite right;-)

Jack Ellison
Date: 7/27/2017 8:27:00 AM

It's okay... I'm still crapping on and damn proud I'm still doing it at this advanced age! HAVE A GOOD ONE!!!

Russell Sivey

Date: 7/27/2017 7:36:00 AM

Yes! So very true, you must stick to your game plan even if things go South! You have penned a grandiose write here my friend! I really loved reading it this morning! You have impressed me by your fine skill and delicate word choices...Great Work!!

Jack Ellison
Date: 7/27/2017 7:42:00 AM

I'm truly amazed at your positive outlook, my friend! Two peas in a pod! Cheers Jack!!!