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Nascar Wild Man Willy

The speedometer busted sixty, motor screaming r r r s, Smoked his firestones weavin’ and passin’ cars! He slammed third dumped the clutch and headed north, At a hundred five, he hit the highway and found fourth… The smell of burning rubber filled the cab, He pressed pedal to the metal for all she had! Turbo screamed, the engine roared! G,s pressed him to the back seat board, He couldn't go on, His strength was gone! His muscles stretched and ached, How much more could he take!? His only fan totally enthralled Gears grinding,..engine stalled He couldn't help it...his eyelids dropped like lead! Dad hugged him out of his Big Wheels and said, ”Wild Man Willy, my son..it’s time for bed. “…

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 10/10/2011 12:32:00 AM
Wow, on the edge of my seat till that last line! Was he playing with those little metal cars? Loved the whole verse Robert, great imagination.
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Date: 7/18/2010 7:03:00 AM
Enjoyed your powerful write today, Robert! Keep your pen flowing and thank you for your recent comment! Have a nice week..And all the best! .Gert
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Date: 5/1/2010 6:23:00 AM
Excellent poetry.......Charma
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Date: 4/27/2010 7:56:00 AM
Well worth the read my friend...However I wish Big Wheels were around when we were kids eh....God Bless Friend....Taz
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Date: 4/11/2010 11:18:00 PM
Oh! I love it...isn't great to get so caught up in the joy of imagination until even the excitement calls us to return to the One in sleep in the arms of our Father. There may be something in your soup mail if my own call to sleep will permit just a few more moments here in my secret garden.
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Date: 4/10/2010 10:18:00 PM
ok, you got me, robert. It was just a kid with a BIG imagination. hahaha. good one, Andrea
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Date: 4/9/2010 9:27:00 AM
This is a wonderful witty write Robert...very cute...I can only imagine what 105 mph would feel like. Thanks so much for sharing and for taking the time to read my writes. Hope you have a blessed day~Mary~
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Date: 4/6/2010 4:59:00 PM
Hey Robert, Thnx for leaving comments on my piece....I'm asking Audrey to post this comment on my behalf .....later, Jimmy
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Date: 4/6/2010 4:35:00 AM
Clever piece , Robert as I was just about to yell ;" SLOW DOWN ". . . .
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Date: 4/5/2010 6:43:00 PM
Oh, oh, you had me going. Great climax. thanks for your comments on my Riley poem. Joyce
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Date: 4/5/2010 1:02:00 PM
A wild ride Robert, had me going 105 lol- I wore out 3 Big Wheels on the El Cerrito hills
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Date: 4/4/2010 1:13:00 PM
Excellent write that drew me in and held my attention...Keep the magical pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 4/4/2010 8:20:00 AM
May our Lord bless you and yours on this Easter Day Robert. Love Carol and Family
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Date: 4/4/2010 6:45:00 AM
LOL Your NASCAR Willy sounds like a wonderful little man who brings great joy to your life, Robert. Hope your family enjoys a Happy Easter! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/3/2010 6:50:00 PM
great!! wild adventure for a little while.
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Date: 4/3/2010 5:16:00 PM
wonderful, great ending
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Date: 4/3/2010 1:44:00 PM
I love this one it is so cute. Excellent write. God Bless Phyl
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Date: 4/3/2010 1:44:00 PM
Hey! Whatcha be doin? I was so excited, then you pulled me right outa my fun. As usual you are wonderfully articulate. Happy Easter, daver
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