James Inman Poet Acrostic

Narwhal Secrets

N arwhal... fathomless dreamer of the deep
   A resting beauty and fantastic myth
      R arest of rare, chased from the land by modern man
         W here Unique Horns once pranced the forests, left only Corpses Whaling
            H eathen magic has again cast its spell and hidden you
               A las, you sing your woe filled song in your last retreat
                  L iving secret lives in the swaddling comfort of the deep




09/18/15

Impress me with a NARWHAL poem: 3rd Place
SKAT A
10/15/15

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Len Gasun October 30, 2015 at 11:54 AM An excellent and very creative acrostic poem for this wonderful sea creatures my dear friend, James. I'm so glad to read this stunning piece tonight. Thank you so much for sharing! My warm congratulations as well on your great win! love lots and big hugs, Leonora James Inman October 30, 2015 at 1:47 PM Such a wonderful sweet thing to say, Leonora. I think I like your words better than mine. Thank you.

Janice Canerdy October 29, 2015 at 9:39 PM Skillfully and imaginatively done--Congratulations on your win, James. Ja ice James Inman October 30, 2015 at 8:05 AM Thank you Janice

Teddy Kimathi October 29, 2015 at 7:53 AM A great work of art, pulsating with imagery! Congrats for your WIN in this amazing piece James! ;-) James Inman October 29, 2015 at 9:57 AM Thanks Teddy.

Skat A October 28, 2015 at 1:33 AM James, Congratulations on your Awesome Narwhal WIN. I'm inviting you on over to my Narwhal Party. AT -- http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_blogs/blog_detail.aspx?BlogID=29146&PoetID=17922 -- Don't be a party pooper, bring a smile or two. :-) Forever ~SKAT~ James Inman October 28, 2015 at 11:30 AM Oh, what a sweet invitation, how could I refuse? See you there! By the way, great contest and thank you for hosting it.

Andrea Dietrich September 22, 2015 at 10:46 PM you chose a great form to do this one, Ralph. I really like this and how you tied it to fantasy! James Inman October 29, 2015 at 9:56 AM Thanks Andrea

Constance La France September 22, 2015 at 11:08 AM James, very nice, loved how you did this write, 7 and thanks for visiting my poems, monster and embarrassing ~~ James Inman September 22, 2015 at 1:00 PM Thanks, BW.

CayCay Godwin September 18, 2015 at 1:16 PM You composed a winner! Very clever and creative, James ... CayCay James Inman September 18, 2015 at 1:35 PM Thank you, CayCay, always look forward to your visits.