Shrineetee Kar Poet Tanka

Narwhal

Unicorn and fish
joined in, to create a niche
unlike a notion
in the waves of the ocean 
it looks really awesome 

A whale with a horn
Ocean has a unicorn
it just seemed to be
A Tale of a fish forlorn
Till all the male Narwhals tusked

Tusk and fight they did 
For territory they lead
No risk of a fall
Polar ice makes resolve tall
They are nice and cool Narwhal.

Shrineetee Kar
13.10.2015


For the contest by SKAT A

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Skat A October 28, 2015 at 1:35 AM Shrineetee, Congratulations on your Awesome Narwhal WIN. I'm inviting you on over to my Narwhal Party. AT -- http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_blogs/blog_detail.aspx?BlogID=29146&PoetID=17922 -- Don't be a party pooper, bring a smile or two. :-) Forever ~SKAT~

Eve Roper October 14, 2015 at 12:04 AM Wonderful descriptive write a 7 and good luck in the contest. Shrineetee Kar October 15, 2015 at 11:51 PM Thanks Eve. Appreciated. Regards. Shrineetee.