Narwhal

Unicorn and fish joined in, to create a niche unlike a notion in the waves of the ocean it looks really awesome A whale with a horn Ocean has a unicorn it just seemed to be A Tale of a fish forlorn Till all the male Narwhals tusked Tusk and fight they did For territory they lead No risk of a fall Polar ice makes resolve tall They are nice and cool Narwhal. Shrineetee Kar 13.10.2015 For the contest by SKAT A

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Skat A

Date: 10/28/2015 1:35:00 AM

Shrineetee, Congratulations on your Awesome Narwhal WIN. I'm inviting you on over to my Narwhal Party. AT -- http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_blogs/blog_detail.aspx?BlogID=29146&PoetID=17922 -- Don't be a party pooper, bring a smile or two. :-) Forever ~SKAT~

Eve Roper

Date: 10/14/2015 12:04:00 AM

Wonderful descriptive write a 7 and good luck in the contest.

Shrineetee Kar
Date: 10/15/2015 11:51:00 PM

Thanks Eve. Appreciated. Regards. Shrineetee.