Narrow Path

I walk down a narrow path
That leads to the heart,
But I can’t see another soul.
Only the deep black sky,
The cold air,
The icy breeze.
I walked past,
I have other places to go.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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December 30, 2020 at 8:41 AM
Nicely done!
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December 30, 2020 at 8:41 AM
Nicely done!
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December 30, 2020 at 8:41 AM
Nicely done!
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December 30, 2020 at 8:40 AM
Very well written.
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December 30, 2020 at 8:40 AM
very nice
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