Narrow Margin

- in those moments, it shines.
The nostalgia of an upside down
world glinting up through hourglasses of years,
a mark impressed upon flesh; a scar harbouring
simple childhood games inside a jagged
line now faded. Occasionally it flares,
reddens from a twist of skin uncomfortable,
or in the tightness of early morning dressing;
the twinge acts as an echo, a ripple, a call from
back then, years ago, an era lost like sand 
through fingers sweaty from summer heat,
lemonade with ice cubes clinking. The scar,
the mark, that narrow margin of error, a
Faultline physical memory running like a border
along my skin. And you were there, holding my hand
- in those moments, it shines.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Ibeh Avatar
March 4, 2024 at 9:04 AM
Heartiest congratulations on your podium win in my contest with this beautifully composed poem, Thomas:-) I enjoyed reading it!
Alex Avatar
March 1, 2024 at 8:20 PM
"the twinge acts as an echo, a ripple, a call from back then, years ago, an era lost like sand through fingers sweaty from summer heat" - Picturesque illustration. Congratulations!
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