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Narrow Escape

Narrow escape Daring the jungle, had always been my greatest desire, to pursue the rabbits right into their hole. But mom won't let me go Anyway, I schemed out a plan, and I sneaked out at noon. At last the wild stretches out right in my front, Off i went in search of the rabbits But things went too bad, for I dug my hands into a hole, searching it for rabbit, but i got bitten, alas, it was a snake den not a rabbit hole Forgetting my fruits, I ran all the way home. Mom took me to the doctor. “well, we have to amputate his hand, it damaged already,better than having all parts paralyzed"

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Date: 6/24/2022 4:19:00 PM
Hello David Olarenwaju, David, I hope that this is only a poem. Enjoy your eveningmy friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/29/2022 4:36:00 PM
Hello David Olarenwaju, oh by true events. okay. Enjoy your evening my friend.
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Olarenwaju David
Date: 6/27/2022 2:11:00 PM
It is perhaps, but inspired by true events. Please have a pleasant day.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/25/2022 12:25:00 PM
Hello David Olarenwaju, welcome to Poetry Soup. Enjoy your weekend. my friend.

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