Narciuss With a Glass of Water 'Revised'
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' 'Holy Water' '
' ' '
' ' ' ' '
'an empty verse'
an empty hand
~understand~
The glass IN your hand
can drown out ten-
thousand and ten;
Hearts,
~an emptiness~
looking for
a
f
l
o
w
e
r
. . . . . . .
Oh, Holy Nights enlighten me to see,
Ten Drops from the glass
I could drown myself asking for a drink
~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~
I ponder the greatness of love
and then I let it go
two hands under the masters hand
* * * * * * *Romans 16:11*******
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A parade of parodies
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