Narcissus Vs Cupid

Freud sent vision rays 
To the patient’s eyes,
Her smile scent broke 
Thin shell of silence. 
Why the lady proud
Sought a gloom’s veil,
Had her interest all 
In none but to herself?
Narcissus smiled leaning
Upon  the golden swing,
While lilies bloomed 
In the forest pond.
Cupid’s arrows too
Could not break the thrall.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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October 14, 2013 at 12:16 AM
Please give once over to the form you have chosen for the write, Nice exp0ressions well penned, Tajudeen
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