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Narcissus

I planted a daffodil today
To remind me of you
When it blooms in the spring,
It will show me the way
Away from your vanity~
Perhaps your mirror will crack at last!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Etgen-Baker Avatar
October 20, 2025 at 5:42 PM
I felt the disappointment yet the hope with the daffodils...they are my favorite.
Achara Avatar
October 20, 2025 at 6:01 PM
Thank you. Daffodils are a favorite of mine too.
Peranteau Avatar
October 19, 2025 at 2:53 PM
I am the poet uv daffodil dear poet...sad to attach disappointment with such beauty...your write cuts though...i'm sure it were felt....much love
Achara Avatar
October 19, 2025 at 4:45 PM
Thank you. I still love daffodils..
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