Narcissist

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Writing Challenge - N words - Poetry Contest, Sponsor - Constance La France, Date written: 07/25/2023. (Triple Tricube)

clay mask cracks,
     falls way;
          janus-faced!
                                          self-absorbed;
                                     your skin, so
                                wafer-thinned.
impostor
     syndrome quite
          off the charts.
                                           arrogance
                                      knows no bounds;
                                 entitled.
so in love
     with your own
          reflection.
                                             delusions
                                        of grandeur,
                                   pathetic.
it kills you
     deep inside
          given the...
                                             cold shoulder
                                        as you crave
                                   attention,
and you're no
     God's gift to
           human race!

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Date: 7/27/2023 1:12:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. WOW!!! What a creative write. Great ending you have here. Have a great day.....................
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 7/27/2023 3:54:00 PM
Thank you very much, Paula:-)
Date: 7/26/2023 10:54:00 PM
Wonderfully done, intriguing, interesting... God bless you and Congrats on a top win. Love, Gina
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 7/27/2023 5:29:00 AM
Thank you very much indeed, Gina:-) xoxo
Date: 7/26/2023 5:31:00 AM
Perfectly described!-- and you're no God's gift to human race! I agree! BIG congrats on your win, Edward.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 7/26/2023 6:51:00 AM
As always, thank you very much, Vijay:-)
Date: 7/26/2023 1:50:00 AM
Very creative indeed, a big congratulations.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 7/26/2023 4:22:00 AM
Thank you so much, Terry:-)
Date: 7/25/2023 11:59:00 PM
Uniquely written. Beautiful. Congratulations!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 7/26/2023 4:22:00 AM
Thank you very much, Christuraj:-)
Date: 7/25/2023 4:23:00 PM
Presented perfectly. Good word, great poem, now there's a winner. BOL in the contest Edward
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 7/25/2023 5:22:00 PM
Thank you very much, SV:-)
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