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Writing Challenge - N words - Poetry Contest, Sponsor - Constance La France, Date written: 07/25/2023. (Triple Tricube)

clay mask cracks, falls way; janus-faced! self-absorbed; your skin, so wafer-thinned. impostor syndrome quite off the charts. arrogance knows no bounds; entitled. so in love with your own reflection. delusions of grandeur, pathetic. it kills you deep inside given the... cold shoulder as you crave attention, and you're no God's gift to human race!

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Date: 7/27/2023 1:12:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. WOW!!! What a creative write. Great ending you have here. Have a great day.....................
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 7/27/2023 3:54:00 PM
Thank you very much, Paula:-)
Date: 7/26/2023 10:54:00 PM
Wonderfully done, intriguing, interesting... God bless you and Congrats on a top win. Love, Gina
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 7/27/2023 5:29:00 AM
Thank you very much indeed, Gina:-) xoxo
Date: 7/26/2023 5:31:00 AM
Perfectly described!-- and you're no God's gift to human race! I agree! BIG congrats on your win, Edward.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 7/26/2023 6:51:00 AM
As always, thank you very much, Vijay:-)
Date: 7/26/2023 1:50:00 AM
Very creative indeed, a big congratulations.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 7/26/2023 4:22:00 AM
Thank you so much, Terry:-)
Date: 7/25/2023 11:59:00 PM
Uniquely written. Beautiful. Congratulations!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 7/26/2023 4:22:00 AM
Thank you very much, Christuraj:-)
Date: 7/25/2023 4:23:00 PM
Presented perfectly. Good word, great poem, now there's a winner. BOL in the contest Edward
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 7/25/2023 5:22:00 PM
Thank you very much, SV:-)

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