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Narcissist

Surging he rode the rogue wave, rendering righteous destruction in his path. With lethal intent, he corralled his quarry in the bay. The serene cool crystal waters soon turned crimson red with the blood of the innocent and vulnerable. brutal hearts brazen emotional tsunamis slay in the shallows Rhymes & Reasons Poetry Contest (Haibun) Sponsor: Line Gauthier Written 18/06/2020

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Date: 6/18/2020 11:56:00 AM
powerfully penned I especially like your haiku ending:-) hugs jan xx
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Georgia Kereopa
Date: 6/22/2020 2:16:00 AM
Jan, thank you always for reading and comments. Im really enjoying haibun, bingeworthy.
Date: 6/18/2020 7:42:00 AM
Narcissist....heart of brutality... Superb haibun
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Georgia Kereopa
Date: 6/22/2020 2:13:00 AM
Enjoyed your comment, wording "heart of brutality" and would like to expand on this concept.

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