Georgia Kereopa Poet Haibun

Narcissist

Surging he rode the rogue wave, rendering righteous destruction in his path.  With lethal intent, he corralled his quarry in the bay. The serene cool crystal waters soon turned crimson red with the blood of the innocent and vulnerable.   

brutal hearts brazen
emotional tsunamis
slay in the shallows

Rhymes & Reasons Poetry Contest (Haibun)
Sponsor: Line Gauthier
Written 18/06/2020

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Jan Allison June 18, 2020 at 11:56 AM powerfully penned I especially like your haiku ending:-) hugs jan xx Georgia Kereopa June 22, 2020 at 2:16 AM Jan, thank you always for reading and comments. Im really enjoying haibun, bingeworthy.

Mahtab Bangalee June 18, 2020 at 7:42 AM Narcissist....heart of brutality... Superb haibun Georgia Kereopa June 22, 2020 at 2:13 AM Enjoyed your comment, wording "heart of brutality" and would like to expand on this concept.