Nana's Baking Pan

I look through Nana's broken window so many times
However, today it seems so different
 watching the blackbirds pecking at the pears
in the avocados trees 

 Nana harvested the best ripened avocados pears
The color of dark burgundy, and green 
All came from that old worn-out tree;

Every year we carefully inspect each pear
before packing them in the brown barrel 
They were moist and delicious on the inside
so easy to peel, those lovely ripened pears.

Here I am today about to,
 open the last mark box of Nana's things
slowly, I unfold the last item
 all wrapped in an old newspaper
It was her bread pan; 
the one with the two handles

an old burnt crumb lodged in the corners of the pan
I smiled, I weep, 
Hello! to you too Nana
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Alex Avatar
May 5, 2013 at 12:59 PM
A lucid journey through past and present. Enjoyed reading it.
Lander Avatar
May 6, 2013 at 7:09 AM
Oh yes it were.. thank you Gokul Alex
Dietrich Avatar
May 5, 2013 at 9:14 AM
this is superb poetry. LOVE it. and love the nostalgia.
Anglesey Avatar
May 4, 2013 at 12:04 PM
I love the imagery and flow. The last stanza makes this a striking piece of poetry. I want to know more about nana and her breadpan
Lander Avatar
May 5, 2013 at 8:50 AM
Thank you so much Karen for commenting, I think i have a few poem about my Nana somewhere ..around blessed
Lander Avatar
May 4, 2013 at 6:16 AM
thank you so much Donna for comment this is the year i am working the good times nana and i spent together I missed her so much.. Blessed
Jones Avatar
May 3, 2013 at 8:09 PM
Oh Annie...this brought a tear to me...I loved my grandma too...
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