Len Gasun Poet Rhyme

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-I was here Oct. 10, 2016

-A SOUVENIR POEM

Naminara Island

You unfold the mantles of paradise in my eyes,
As I, ambassador of beauty in curtsy arms, rise!

          
                                        When I stand from the deck with awe and wonder,                     
                               I wish our ferry flies and soars high like a bird.               
                         All charms I see are truths of songs I’ve heard,              
               As whirs of zip wires play like violin over yonder.               
       While I stroll the landscape to explore and wander     
I’ve glimpse of the moon peeking behind a day cloud curd.


      moonlight smiles with sun 
               as bright foliage unfurl    
                     pirouette cold gentle breeze       
                         adorn forest field 
                              eyes dance on green lake to shore                                                                                          
                                   sun-moon ballroom I sojourn                                                                           
                                                                                        
                                                                                                               
            October 19, 2016    11.50am
            Copyright2016Leonora Galinta
            All Rights Reserved


First Place
Contest: Three Style II (Couplet, Sedoka, Free Verse)
Judged: 10/22/2016
Sponsor: Poet Laura Loo

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Afolabi Muideen October 23, 2016 at 6:18 AM Really, you penned this well. I love how it flows. Congrats on your placement.........A.M. Len Gasun October 25, 2016 at 10:16 AM Thank you for taking your time to read my poem and for your congratulatory comment my dear friend AM. More blessings. Hugs!

Anu Nayak October 23, 2016 at 2:45 AM Dear Galeo, congratulations on your top placement , so nice! amazing poem! lovely presentation, Naminara Island rocks!!!//love, Anu:) Len Gasun October 25, 2016 at 10:15 AM Thank you for taking your time to read my poem and for your congratulatory comment my dear friend, laxmi. More blessings. Hugs.

Eve Roper October 22, 2016 at 10:23 PM Very good, Galeo, congratulations on your win :) Hugs Eve Len Gasun October 25, 2016 at 10:13 AM Thank you for taking your time to read my poem and for your congratulatory comment my dear friend, Eve. More blessings. Hugs.

Eve Roper October 22, 2016 at 10:22 PM Very good, Galeo, congratulations on your win :) Hugs Eve Len Gasun October 25, 2016 at 10:12 AM Thank you for taking your time to read my poem and for your congratulatory comment my dear friend, Eve. More blessings. Hugs.

Beautiful Scars October 22, 2016 at 10:57 AM wow Galeo-absolutely stunning it this...you met the expectations and then some. Lovely layout and the sedoka is right on...congratulations on your placement and thank you for being a part of my contest :) -luloo Len Gasun October 25, 2016 at 10:11 AM Thank you for taking your time to read my poem, for the inspiration through your challenging contest/forms and for my placement my dear friend. More blessings. Hugs.

Mike Hauser October 19, 2016 at 5:34 PM Love this write. Len Gasun October 25, 2016 at 10:09 AM Thank you for taking your time to read my poem and your encouraging comment my dear friend. More blessings! Hugs.

Agnes Krampe October 19, 2016 at 2:50 PM Beautiful. Love the first line! Agnes Len Gasun October 25, 2016 at 10:08 AM Thank you for taking your time to read my poem and your encouraging comment my dear friend, Agnes. More blessings! Hugs.

Nette Onclaud October 19, 2016 at 6:26 AM ohh, lori... so breathtaking.. i wish i were there... looking forward to a journey with you!.. love and huggs Len Gasun October 25, 2016 at 10:07 AM Thank you for taking your time to read my poem and your encouraging comment my dear friend, Nette. More blessings. Hugs.

Tim Smith October 19, 2016 at 6:00 AM Wow...this is so beautiful. It jumps off the page as your words came to life...a fav Len Gasun October 25, 2016 at 10:06 AM Thank you for taking your time to read my poem, your encouraging comment and fave my dear friend, Tim. More blessings. Hugs.