Nameless

Nameless, 
For me, you happiness, remained 

Till 

The beats of my heart chanted 
Her name! 

 
© Demetrios Trifiatis 
    19  MARCH 2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Manassian Avatar
March 20, 2014 at 8:50 PM
I read this earlier and am coming now to add my voice to those here who have fallen in love with this piece. You write with such beauty and sincerity. Nameless....what intrigue. I'm sure the one for whom you have written, my dear poet, is thrilled with this write.
Trifiatis Avatar
March 21, 2014 at 12:16 PM
How can someone ever be able to love or write on love without being sincere and his words to be devoid of beauty? Oh, yes, the lady must be thrilled but I am more thrilled for she inspired me to write this little poem! Thank you for such an extremely beautiful comment dear Eileen!
Lyle Avatar
March 20, 2014 at 4:27 PM
eftihia einai zoi mou mazis sou. loved it Demetrios .shame about my Greek . Regards Andy O Irlandos
Trifiatis Avatar
March 20, 2014 at 4:40 PM
You should be proud of your Greek! I hope the lady who taught you that was very smart for she has chosen a gentleman like you, my friend Robert! Thank you for visiting. Always an honor!
A   Avatar
March 20, 2014 at 10:08 AM
WOW! Demetrios, love this, ... A mood changer.. haha... Enjoyed...Linda
Trifiatis Avatar
March 20, 2014 at 10:36 AM
Life, as you very well know my dear PD, is not monolithic therefore all aspects of it must be dealt with at the same time, without changing mood! Thank you for coming down from...The Olympus! Ha-ha! Enjoyed your visit!
Acquah Avatar
March 20, 2014 at 12:25 AM
I MUST ADMIT I AM CLUELESS-AS TO WHAT/ OR FOR WHOM - THIS BUILDING WAS BUILT FOR, BUT I LOVE THE CONSTRUCTION.
Trifiatis Avatar
March 20, 2014 at 7:52 AM
Having read your last poem I say that I see the reason! Yes, the construction is great! Thank you for your visit dear Vicki! I am so sorry you suffered so much!
Ioane Avatar
March 19, 2014 at 8:00 PM
Dear Demetrios, you have the gift of loading so much emotion in just a few words, I must learn!! A beautiful write for a beautiful person. Alofas, Tiaua.
Trifiatis Avatar
March 20, 2014 at 7:54 AM
Alofas my graceful Tiaua! Thank you for your enormous comment! You write so beautifully yourself!
Carrillo Avatar
March 19, 2014 at 6:31 PM
Beautiful words with a lot of meaning. Thanks for sharing and for The good wishes on face book. Blessings always.... Lucy
Trifiatis Avatar
March 20, 2014 at 7:55 AM
Happy to see you dear Lucy and happy I am that you received my wishes! Thank you for your kind words!
Hamilton Avatar
March 19, 2014 at 6:12 PM
very descriptive and beautiful Demetrios ty for visiting my page hugs
Trifiatis Avatar
March 20, 2014 at 7:57 AM
Dear Shadow , how nice you reciprocated my visit! Thank you for your beautiful comment!
Andresen Avatar
March 19, 2014 at 12:36 PM
- BEAUTIFUL!! .....JUST, BEAUTIFUL!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Trifiatis Avatar
March 19, 2014 at 1:05 PM
Thank you Anne Lise, for your exclamation point!
Onclaud Avatar
March 19, 2014 at 11:14 AM
my, what a lilting melody, D... your words of affection delight.. huggs!
Trifiatis Avatar
March 19, 2014 at 1:08 PM
If my words delighted you then really must be a lilting melody! Thank you!
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