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Nameless

Nameless, 
For me, you happiness, remained 

Till 

The beats of my heart chanted 
Her name! 

 
© Demetrios Trifiatis 
    19  MARCH 2014

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Eileen Manassian

Date: 3/20/2014 8:50:00 PM

I read this earlier and am coming now to add my voice to those here who have fallen in love with this piece. You write with such beauty and sincerity. Nameless....what intrigue. I'm sure the one for whom you have written, my dear poet, is thrilled with this write.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 3/21/2014 12:16:00 PM

How can someone ever be able to love or write on love without being sincere and his words to be devoid of beauty? Oh, yes, the lady must be thrilled but I am more thrilled for she inspired me to write this little poem! Thank you for such an extremely beautiful comment dear Eileen!

Robert Andrew Lyle

Date: 3/20/2014 4:27:00 PM

eftihia einai zoi mou mazis sou. loved it Demetrios .shame about my Greek . Regards Andy O Irlandos

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 3/20/2014 4:40:00 PM

You should be proud of your Greek! I hope the lady who taught you that was very smart for she has chosen a gentleman like you, my friend Robert! Thank you for visiting. Always an honor!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/20/2014 10:08:00 AM

WOW! Demetrios, love this, ... A mood changer.. haha... Enjoyed...Linda

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 3/20/2014 10:36:00 AM

Life, as you very well know my dear PD, is not monolithic therefore all aspects of it must be dealt with at the same time, without changing mood! Thank you for coming down from...The Olympus! Ha-ha! Enjoyed your visit!

Vicki Acquah

Date: 3/20/2014 12:25:00 AM

I MUST ADMIT I AM CLUELESS-AS TO WHAT/ OR FOR WHOM - THIS BUILDING WAS BUILT FOR, BUT I LOVE THE CONSTRUCTION.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 3/20/2014 7:52:00 AM

Having read your last poem I say that I see the reason! Yes, the construction is great! Thank you for your visit dear Vicki! I am so sorry you suffered so much!

Tiaua M Ioane

Date: 3/19/2014 8:00:00 PM

Dear Demetrios, you have the gift of loading so much emotion in just a few words, I must learn!! A beautiful write for a beautiful person. Alofas, Tiaua.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 3/20/2014 7:54:00 AM

Alofas my graceful Tiaua! Thank you for your enormous comment! You write so beautifully yourself!