Nameless

Nameless

Without feelings

Leaving her completely

Heart broken forever goodbye 

Nothing

losscinquain

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Andrea Dietrich

January 4, 2011 at 4:45 PM

Not a good way to remain!

James Fraser

November 21, 2010 at 10:33 AM

So little written, tells so much Sharon >> James :)

Marilyn Hernandez

November 20, 2010 at 10:59 PM

I love this one...makes me feel passion and loneliness. Short but complex. Beautiful poem...also made me think of one of my favorite books...New Moon by Stephenie Meyer...lol, sorry, I'm such a TwiFan. Also, thanks for your comment on my poem "No Hope for the Hopeless." And don't worry...even someone as stubborn as I can get a bit hopeful at times.

Carolyn Devonshire

November 18, 2010 at 10:38 AM

Short and so powerful, Sharon! You chose a good form to express these sad emotions. Thanks so much for your comments on "Revel Joyfully." I hope you are not going through a breakup right now before the holidays. Blessings and peace, Carolyn

Fabiyas M V

November 18, 2010 at 6:11 AM

Very sweet! I enjoyed it,Sharon

Poet Destroyer A

November 17, 2010 at 7:40 PM

Sharon, what a sad heart breakng way to leave,, enjoyed your poem,..p.d.

Jancarl Campi

November 17, 2010 at 4:45 PM

I like the this poem. If I may suggest try this; Nameless/Without feelings/Leaving her completely/Heart broken/Forever/Goodbye/Nothing. This will slow down your poem more. Thanks for your comment on my work. Take care, Jancarl C.

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