Nameless

"A mother's love is made in heaven." Quote Written By Poet

She was a young and beautiful bride,
then her handsome husband died.
The fast car came out of nowhere,
there was nothing left but prayer.
Life was about to take her on a wild ride,
but she could not go and hide.
A precious baby girl was born,
she was told to be happy and do not mourn.
For now she is dressed in pink and is nameless,
lying in the hospital crib blameless.
Loving adopted parents would come,
and save her as she sucked her thumb.
Somethings can start out bad and end up good,
our new name is parenthood.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023



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Date: 12/29/2023 10:12:00 AM
Such a touching, sad poem dear Paula that draws the reader in. A wonderful title too. ‘ for now she is dressed in pink and is nameless’’ lying in the hospital crib blameless’ is so profound. Arr! I’m glad it ended with loving adopted parents (and was fiction) Many congratulations on your very high placement on the top 100 list my friend :) Happy New Year! Xx
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/29/2023 11:30:00 AM
Great to see you. Thanks for your note and for your congratulations on being on the top 100 poem list. Yes, a sad fiction write. Glad you found my write to be a touching with a wonderful title. Have a blessed/wonderful day. Happy New Year/write more in 2024.............
Date: 12/17/2023 12:57:00 PM
A great poem t9 be featured in the top 100 new poems...Congratulations Paula
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/29/2023 7:26:00 AM
Great to see you. Thanks for your note and for your congratulations on being on the top 100 new poems. Guess I need to check this out. Glad you found my write to be a great poem. Have a blessed/wonderful day............
Date: 11/27/2023 7:48:00 AM
Excellent Paula congratulations on your well-deserved first place
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 11/27/2023 6:24:00 PM
Great to see you. Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Glad you found my write to be excellent. That made my day. Thanks.... Have a blessed/wonderful day............
Date: 11/26/2023 9:42:00 PM
"Somethings can start out bad and end up good" - A great writing on a great theme. Congratulations!
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 11/27/2023 6:21:00 PM
Great to see you. Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Glad you enjoyed it. Have a blessed/wonderful day............
Date: 11/26/2023 8:05:00 AM
"1 Place" Nameless ~ Date Written: 11/17/2023 ~ "Not A True Story, Just A Write......"
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Date: 11/20/2023 12:46:00 PM
A very poignant sentiment, Paula. Sadly such be visited among us all. Aloha, William
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 11/21/2023 8:19:00 AM
Great to see you. Thanks for your note.  "Not A True Story, Just A Write......" Glad you enjoyed it. Have a blessed/wonderful day............
Date: 11/20/2023 7:39:00 AM
- A heartfelt and lovely poem, Paula :) - Best wishes in the contest ... a top winning poem I think :) - hugs
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 11/21/2023 8:18:00 AM
Great to see you. Thanks for your note and for your best wishes. Glad you found this to be heartfelt/lovely. Hugs... Have a blessed/wonderful day............
Date: 11/18/2023 7:13:00 PM
This is a very beautiful and heartfelt poem my dear poet friend Paula. YOu've painted amazingly the wonder of life in this exquisite rhyme poem of yours. Loving this a lot along with the quote that goes with it and going to my fave dear. Thanks a lot for sharing. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 11/19/2023 11:01:00 AM
Great to see you. Thanks for your note. Glad you love my write & quote. I see FAV??? Thank You, for the FAV/very kind words. My heart has a smile on it. Have a blessed/wonderful day............
Date: 11/17/2023 10:04:00 PM
A well written and heart touching story, Paula. Many times, children find good parents that raise them with love and support, and they turn out well-adjusted and happy. Of course, we normally hear of the tragedies, and the abuse of adopted children. Thanks for sharing your poetic talents with us, my friend. Have a great weekend! Bill
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 11/19/2023 10:54:00 AM
Great to see you. Thanks for your note/very kind words. Glad you like my write/found it to be touching. You are right, children can have a hard life. Have a blessed/wonderful day............
Date: 11/17/2023 5:07:00 PM
You really know how to bring the reader into the mood of the story. Good poem!
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 11/19/2023 10:52:00 AM
Great to see you. Thanks for your note/very kind words. Glad you like my write. I enjoyed writing this one. Have a blessed/wonderful day............
Date: 11/17/2023 1:29:00 PM
This is very moving Paula. I guess the young bride was overcome with being a single mom and unable to care for her baby after it's birth? It's wonderful that the infant was adopted into a loving home, very touching.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 11/19/2023 10:47:00 AM
Great to see you. Thanks for your note. "Not A True Story, Just A Write......" Glad you enjoyed it. Have a blessed/wonderful day............
Date: 11/17/2023 1:23:00 PM
An amazing touching poem Paula! Love this….lDebx
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Date: 11/19/2023 10:46:00 AM
Great to see you. Thanks for your note. Glad you love this/found this to be an amazing touching write. That makes me very, very happy. Thanks... Have a blessed/wonderful day............
Date: 11/17/2023 11:52:00 AM
So heartfelt poem/story Paula. Your exquisite writing was so profound to touch the deepest of the strongest soul, and your imagery was just stunning, Best of luck with the contest.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 11/19/2023 10:43:00 AM
Great to see you. Thanks for your note, very kind words and for your best of luck. Glad you enjoyed my write. I enjoyed writing this one. Have a blessed/wonderful day............
Date: 11/17/2023 11:18:00 AM
Paula, this is awesome. I know life is not a smooth highway. Nor is is a field of iridescent bubbles and giggles. That’s plain nuts! The heroine passed on her gift to the world, not kill the baby! Great ending, delightfully shines of generosity and bravery. You know I am FAVING this. I like depth in poetry. Pangie xxxx
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Date: 11/19/2023 10:40:00 AM
Great to see you. Thanks for your note. Glad you found this awesome. I see FAV??? Thank You, that put a smile on my heart. Have a blessed/wonderful day............
Date: 11/17/2023 10:12:00 AM
This is making me tear up gosh, how heart wrenching is this story, so very well written and the quote is so true. Ah a fave for me and definitely a top winner: i cant even imagine the pain, always a pleasure reading you, sending you light
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 11/17/2023 10:42:00 AM
Great to see you. Thanks for your note. Sorry this made you tear up. "Not A True Story, Just A Write......" Glad you find my writes always a pleasure to read. That makes me very happy. Have a blessed/wonderful~~day/weekend............
Date: 11/17/2023 10:09:00 AM
Nameless ~ Date Written: 11/17/2023 ~ "Not A True Story, Just A Write......"
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