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Nameless

Excitement overflowed in their loving abode. Their hearts were in a whirl. The results showed it’s a girl. With still months to wait All they did was anticipate The coming blessed event. His wife with her Russian accent Sang joyously all day long. Such happiness in each song. All was in readiness for the baby Except to pick a name maybe. His wife had ideas of a sweet name. They just couldn’t agree on one and the same. He wanted her named after his mother Mary Jane Smith, He didn’t pick another. Svetlana Tatiana Galina Smith his wife chose. Now this became a great problem that arose. Finally the day of their daughter’s birth. More precious than gold the baby was worth. To all visitors their beautiful daughter was shown. To the nurses Baby Smith she was known. The form they were given for the birth registry. Would they name her Svetlana or would she be Mary? I will keep you guessing for a little longer. Whose decision was to be the very much stronger? Years passed her nick name became Sweet Pea. A loving family, no happier could they be. Soon it was time for their beautiful girl to go to school. Her Birth Certificate had to be produced, it was the rule. The certificate was handed to the school forthwith Showing the child’s name being Nameless Smith.
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Alex Avatar
November 26, 2023 at 9:46 PM
"Showing the child’s name being Nameless Smith" - A great story beautifully written. Congratulations!
Volumes Avatar
November 27, 2023 at 1:58 AM
Thank you so very much, I am pleased that you liked it.
Goldsmith Avatar
November 26, 2023 at 9:18 AM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful yet very sad "Nameless" write/pretty little girl picture/great ending... Have a great/wonderful day writing away...........
Volumes Avatar
November 27, 2023 at 2:00 AM
Thanks so much Paula. Really appreciate your comment. I had to choose this picture when I saw it. She is a darling isn't she?
De Beaulieu Avatar
November 17, 2023 at 10:01 AM
Hello Speaks volumes, Oh the poor girl. She does not havve a proper name. Enjoy your dayu my cfriend. /Darlene/
De Beaulieu Avatar
November 27, 2023 at 11:39 AM
Hello speaks volumes, It would not be hard to give that little girl a name. I would name her Amanda. Cheers Darlene.
Volumes Avatar
November 27, 2023 at 2:02 AM
With that child's look I am sure they would soon find an agreeable name for her. Darlene thank you so much for your thoughtful comment. Cheers SV
Anaya Avatar
November 16, 2023 at 4:37 PM
The agony, teachers cannot pronounce a name and take it into their own hands. Such is life. I would hide my face red with blush when they pronounced it wrong. Well written and rhymed SV, beautiful child image.
Volumes Avatar
November 16, 2023 at 6:44 PM
Their kindy teacher had it so hard pronouncing their names she just always called my boys "the twinnies" They hated it. Their names ? Marc & Jon ! Thanks for your comment Ana...ya (sorry couldn't resist) ! She is a beautiful child isn't she? Takes attention off my poor poem lol. Cheers.. Wen
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