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FIRST NAME
Te T tered experiences that stem within our being Va R iating interest accordingly links us, implying accomplishment Br U sh up of our trades supports us to encourage one another Ch E ss diversions intensify our maneuvering Ca F feine keeps us sculptured to be at our utmost best Fo R bearers are distinct from us, as we share kindred souls Co I nhered universal characters demonstrate our mirth St E llar so-called quality of us remains immeasurable Ha N dshakes transpires being extremely numerous to calculate Me D als, trophies and other embellishments match our cases
LAST NAME
Al T ogether, we intertwine as a class Bo O ks on bookshelves standing tightly in a row Ar B oretums unifies the similarity of the spores Sc O rpions collectively as a group is called a nest or bed An N alists combine events of any particular year Ba D men are those who do evil tied to a gang
2020 January 07 *1st Place* What's In A Name Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Juliet Ligon

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Date: 2/5/2020 8:51:00 AM
William, congratulations on your win in the contest with this wonderful write _Constance
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Hilo Poet
Date: 2/5/2020 9:15:00 AM
Thank you, Constance, Aloha!~@wk
Date: 2/2/2020 11:23:00 PM
This is a very thoughtful and well laid out Acrostic. Your design in using the third letter in is brilliant!! Congrats Mr. K Lonna
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Date: 2/2/2020 11:30:00 PM
Wired Willy, thanks Lonna, Aloha!~@wk
Date: 2/1/2020 10:26:00 PM
Very well done, William, you've placed a lot of work into your acrostic. A form that is very hard for me to put together especially to flow well. Congratulations on your 1st place win. Hugs Eve
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Date: 2/1/2020 10:39:00 PM
Hi, Eve, Thank you, have a great eve!~@wk
Date: 2/1/2020 6:37:00 AM
Quite a feat, William. Congrats on your top win!
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Date: 2/1/2020 6:47:00 AM
Thank you my friend!~@wk
Date: 1/29/2020 11:31:00 PM
This one I had to read several times and still don't know if I've caught all the meaning. I can see there's a lot of depth here and it was creative to put the acrostic in-between the word and keep that consistent. Congrats on your placement in my contest!
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Date: 1/30/2020 12:12:00 AM
Germanic for Wilhelm an English derivative for William, then Hawaiian 'ke' the, 'kaula' tie or wrap, basically, to bond as in friendship -- Thanks, Juliet, I am honored! Aloha!~@wk
Date: 1/28/2020 11:22:00 PM
What an effort to create this Wonderful piece.. Hats off.. Congrats on your great win William.. Splitting the word with space in between is little awkward to read, at least for me..
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Date: 1/28/2020 11:39:00 PM
Challenging indeed when one steps boldly, thank you Juliet, for sponsoring contest!~@wk

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